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Reviews for Unleashed - Book 1

By : loola
  • From ANON - Vampire_Exotica on August 15, 2005
    Ooooo *Jumps up and down* evil cliffy! Love this fic, it shows real promise and I have throughly enjoyed what I've read so far. (ch 3) Please accept this bag of virtual chocolate frogs in a hope it will help you write. He he I always love eating chocolate as I write. Anywho hope to see an update soon!!
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  • From ANON - FinalPhoenix on August 15, 2005
    "I'm afraid I have some bad news..."


    About what?! This cliffhanger is haunting my dreams!

    You must continue or I fear I shall die.

    Other than that, you're a beautiful writer, you have a pleasant flow to everything.
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  • From ANON - snapescat on August 15, 2005
    This is so good. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Mya on August 08, 2005
    Oh please update, this is amazing! I always love such "undercover couple" stories. The two seem to be dealing with it rather well, except for Snape's affinity for drink.
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  • From ANON - Katie on August 05, 2005
    I love this story.. I hope to hear (and by hear i mean read) more soon....

    You have the makings of a great writer
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  • From ANON - Angie on August 04, 2005
    Very good story so far. Hermione is acting like such an immuture brat, she really needs to grow up. I know Snape can be very infuriating but good grief she could at least act like an adult. Can just see the sexual tension between those two even they can't and man when they do hopefully hook up wow the fireworks are going to be HOT! Keep up the great work and I look forward to when you update.
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  • From ANON - Victoria FE on August 01, 2005
    Have you ever travelled? Wheres the jet lag for them? Even a little travelling induces jet lag. And the typical italian is not stickthin. Have you ever been to Italy? When I arrived in naples, I was shocked because the polizia had uzis in the airport-- this was before 9-11, of course. And Naples smells. And the people don't bathe, and they don't use deodorant. And the water is never potable-- drink a little, get cholera. Can't even brush your teeth with it. Often, even boiling it isn't enough to make the water drinkable, so they need bottled water for even little things like brushing their teeth. Naples is full of poverty. Surely Hermione would notice this and take offense. Theres street venders everywhere that would leap upon her like ravening dogs w/o some companion walking near her. Pickpockets abound.
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  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on August 01, 2005
    I am completely enamored of your story! Great writing, dearie! I love the lust/hate warring between these two! You have done a great job staying true to the characters as well. Can't wait to read more(hint, hint). Update soon, por favor!!! Happy writing wishes from a very happy reader! Tengo que irme! Salud! (I must be off!Cheers!) New fan, Killer K :)
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  • From slygriff21 on July 30, 2005
    Wow! Chapters 2 and 3 were great! I love how Hermione slapped Severus when he felt her up after having those drinks. It was funny. Update soon! I can't wait to find out what bad news Albus has for them.

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - luvssnape on July 30, 2005
    I absolutely love this story. I am so excited to read more. Please update soon.!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Wiccanslyr on July 30, 2005
    OMG!!!

    You can't end a chapter like that!!!

    Evil! You're evil!

    :D

    More please!
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  • From ANON - sandy17lee on July 30, 2005
    What a great story! The mystery is really quite intriguing and your despcriptions of the Italy make me want to hop on a plane to expericence it. The tension between Snape and Hermione is fabulous. I can't wait to see where it is heading!
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  • From ANON - Wiccanslyr on July 27, 2005
    This is getting good. Really enjoying it. More soon please!
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  • From ANON - anya on July 25, 2005
    Very well done. I loved Severus protecting her on the bus! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - mysticsong on July 25, 2005
    I am thoroughly enjoying this!
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