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Reviews for The Caged Songbird

By : BluKnight
  • From ANON - cher on October 05, 2006
    One of my fav fanfictions. I wish you would finish the Sequel.
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  • From ANON - That Girl on August 04, 2006
    WOW! I love your other fics but this is totally good too! I cant wait to read the sequel!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 29, 2005
    I don't want this to be over but if it must then I can't wait for the sequel!
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  • From ANON - Iriska on July 28, 2005
    what a cute fairytale!
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  • From ANON - KamirineGoddess on July 28, 2005
    ::Clears Throat::

    Please for the love of Voldemort fans EVERYWHERE make him act like he does in the book this time. And do work on your *fight* scenes, cause I noted that you either skipped them completely or made them unbelievably short (The Basilik fight was CHEAP: it couldn't see AND Draco barely had to fight it.)
    As a matter of fact: make them ALL act in character because they were WAAAAAAAAAAY OOC. I understand with a different storyline/background they would be *different* but what I mean is at the very least, make them act like they would from the book if they WERE in that situation. Cause I swear Harry was a friggin girl. It got down right laughable.
    And in the sequel, I would like to hope it consist of more than Tom (if he's in it) kidnapping poor Girly Harry and trying to marry him again. That would...suck. Make him EVIL for goodness sakes. I mean you had the whole deranged thing going for you ( as he refused to see Harry didn't love him) but make him actually EVIL.
    And make sure things make sense this time:
    Why were the people so shocked and thinking Draco had *stolen* Harry from Tom when they all HEARD Harry scream he didn't want to marry Tom because he didn't love him? Where they like, not paying attention at all or what? And what was Hermione's purpose? You made it seem like she would end up helping Draco or that her finding out thing about Harry would actually come into use/play when it never did/happen. And what the HECK happened to Draco's men during the fight scene after the Hermione/Draco battle? Why would they just LET Tom try to kill Draco, not once, but twice?
    Furthermore, you need to be more detailed, use more depth when you right. The fights scenes are proof of that. But at a lot of times, it felt like it were rushed.
    And for the love of sanity stay away from cliche` adventure storybased storylines from now on--UNLESS you're going to be detailed about it. And you really DON'T have to end every single chapter with your chapter title--makes the chapter seem more limited. (Though the last one actually fit rather well.)
    Longer chapters wouldn't hurt either, but then, that comes with better detailed chapters.

    The story wasn't bad: It was Just lacking.
    I'll be looking for your sequel.
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  • From ANON - Noodle on July 27, 2005
    What a beautiful Ending! its sooo sweet! I cant wait till August 3rd! I want to see More Harry and Draco!
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  • From ANON - firedragon on July 27, 2005
    Thank you for a very well written fic! I love the pacing of your story...not boring and not leaving details not touched.
    I would always look forward to each updates and now i am looking forward to your sequel.

    Thank you for sharing this wonderful fic!
    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Yana on July 27, 2005
    i can't wait to read the sequel
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  • From ANON - ChibiMaddyChan on July 27, 2005
    Alrighty:

    1. For the love of GOD, in the sequel don't make Harry hit anyone with his fist. I swear I died laughing everytime.
    2. This really seemed like one of those old, cheesy classics about damsels in distress. Really, I forgot Harry was a boy most of the time. It was bad though, don't get me wrong.
    3. A sequel sounds good....just make Tom (if he returns) defeat more interesting. And brainwashing of some sort. That's always fun. I dunno...make him more like...VOLDEMORT...
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  • From ANON - Jen on July 27, 2005
    *standing ovation*

    OH what a great ending! I love this. I love you. Please write the sequel soon. I'll even send you some more strippers! How about cowboys again? ^_^ Great job sweetheart. Keep up the good work.

    Luv & Snuggles,
    Jen
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  • From ANON - ura on July 26, 2005
    Cute story
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  • From ANON - Rita on July 26, 2005
    Wow, this last chapter was very emocioning (is that a word or what?! I'm creating a new dialect!)! Tom is really twisted! The fight between Draco and Tom was terryfic and I just loved it! And imaging the blooded wings of Harry... so pure, so broken, so fragile.... beautiful! And now what is going to happen?! I can't wait! Happy ending and... some R scene between the lovers to erase the bad memories of Harry's "first time"! ;) ****
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  • From ANON - natana on July 26, 2005
    You made me laugh- not the story -the story is great - but the A/N at the bottom of your last chapter. There I was, wondering what made me sink so low and read the fan fiction ( i do not think that our story is twisted NOO , but I know a rather large group of people who would think so - to tell the truth allmost everyone I know would say that ) And it seems that the answer is so simple - I always was that way;)
    BTW, don't mind my ramblings your story is a chef-doeuvre - please update - the sooner the better:)

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  • From ANON - Shame Ness on July 26, 2005
    Thank You! BUT we worked it out and well as all my friends are telling me too just break up with him I can't apparantly im kind of a masochists. But thats only what they say, anyways I enjoyed the chapters and Im so happy cuz I finally got my copy of HBP and well its just yeah.
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  • From ANON - Yana on July 26, 2005
    Draco save him
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