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Reviews for Black Ravens Fly on White Wings

By : MistressOfDarknessAndShadow
  • From ANON - Kana on December 29, 2005
    You truly have to update. I want to see the both of them coming finaly together! They're just so cute... :)
    Detention... Hmm... Lot's of things can happen... I realy look forward to read that. So, please, post the next chapter. I'm dying to see how you're going to bring them together. (What I truly hope is what you are going to do...:) They just belong together . :))
    Anyway, enough of that brabbling. :) I really love this story, so please, write further and update soon! :)

    Hugs
    K
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  • From ANON - harryhollow on July 29, 2005
    Oh, poor harry.... harry is not going to kill himself thinking snape doesn't love him?? Please e-mail me when ever you update
    "Black Ravens Fly on White Wings".
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  • From ANON - antipyro on July 24, 2005
    This starts out really well, I was sorry to see the first chapter sooooo short and end just when things were getting good.

    Catchy title - will we find out what it means???? I hope so.

    So Harry isn't of age yet.......I don't mind but you may want to warn your readers at the start of the next chapter....if something's going to happen, that is.

    If you wouldn't mind also to putting a space line between the chapters to make it easier to read. The font here is soooo small and the chapters just blend into one another, it's hard to keep your line straight.

    Love it all, please post again soon.
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  • From ANON - myniephoenix on July 24, 2005
    nice first chapter... update soon...
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  • From ANON - Hambares on July 23, 2005
    Good start! Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Severus sticks with his plan!
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  • From ANON - amanda on July 23, 2005
    great chapter update soon
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  • From foxracerchick129 on July 23, 2005
    guh, poor Harry. And poor Snappeh. Lovely chapter, looking forward to reading the 'detention' . ^_^

    Love it! - Jessica
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  • From ANON - Malisha on July 23, 2005
    You have an excellent start so far. A few minor mistakes in spelling, and it kind of seems a bit pushed together (format wise). But well written, can't wait for the next chapter!!!! *offers lemon drops*
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