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Reviews for Girls Lie Too

By : CrystalRayne4
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 09, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 07, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on March 01, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 03, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - ashtrail on August 15, 2005
    i thought your story was nice. some grammar and spelling errors, but nothing that made the story not understandable. you kept switching points of view. was the speaker hermione or a third-person? just the little stuff. but your story was good and the idea that hermione can lie too is brilliant. thank you for sharing..
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  • From slygriff21 on July 29, 2005
    I like it! It's funny. You are a great writer! Keep it up!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - T on July 27, 2005
    I guess you werent going for originality and it was decently done, however you seriously need a beta read. You changed tenses continuously and there were paragraphs of poor gramar and editing. Better luck next time, you can only grow from constuctive critism, but the she did this then did that gets old fast!
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  • From ANON - mysticsong on July 25, 2005
    Love it!!!
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  • From ANON - Wiccy on July 25, 2005
    Ok story. There is a major problem with the voice of the story changing from thrid to first person several times. It makes it hard to read.
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  • From ANON - princess_zombie on July 24, 2005
    Awesome start! This is a really good PWP, with a good storyline. The only thing I would suggest is to get a beta or two. You kept switching between second and third person, and between past and present tense. But after those problems are cleared up, all you've got is a great story! Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - lydia on July 24, 2005
    i really liked it. it would be interesting to see how this would play out.
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  • From ANON - Kelstar on July 24, 2005
    Fairly good PWP. Good storyline/premise. However the switch in voices from she to you to she and back again is distracting, along with other consistent grammatical errors. I suggest getting a beta, this would (hopefully) rid you of structural/grammatical problems letting the undoubtly good story shine through. Keep it up, as I said it's a good premise :)
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