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Reviews for Sinful Behavior

By : bbluebabies
  • From ANON - er.... on August 16, 2005
    did you kno that the last chapter isnt't there?

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  • From ANON - Jessica on August 09, 2005
    if im nt wrong, *unless my comp is screwed* chp 6 is same as chp 5... >
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  • From ANON - mymy on August 06, 2005
    nice, but the newest chapter is the same as the last !
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  • From ANON - Mione on August 05, 2005
    Please update soon!
    I check everytime I am online - which is everyday - to see if you have written a new chapter and am most upset when you haven't. I think this is going to be a really great story but it is so annoying when authers in general don't update regularly (however, I know exactly what is it like to have a severe case of writers' block).

    I think some of you reviewers were being rather harsh on you really, If you want an absolutly perfect story then maybe you shouldust go and read a published book becuase mistakes can be made sooooo easily and you can't always spot your own errors. ^.^


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  • From ANON - Mione on August 02, 2005
    This is really very entertaining ^.^
    Please update soon.
    Thankyou
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  • From ANON - Dani on August 02, 2005
    I think you have a potentially good story here, but I think you should consider a beta to review your work. There are some area's that are a little choppy. Like one minute Draco is walking into the bathroom and the next he is in a library. Maybe consider a line or something under the text where time changes? Also, in the beginning where you use both Virginia and Ginevra is confusing. At first I thought Ginny had a split personality or something. lol, Anyway, I hope I didn't offend you, but I really do like to plot of the story and I hope you update often.
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  • From ANON - Crookshanks on August 01, 2005
    Um....wow that was amazin but can u like, i no...FINISH IT

    thanx
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  • From ANON - Skitt on July 28, 2005
    OMG HOW CRUEL U REPEATED A CHAPTER *dies* so unfair XD liked it though very.......creepy XD lmao its cool

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  • From ANON - Jenny on July 26, 2005
    Oh. And Chapter 6 is just a repost of Chapter 5. Thought ya might want to at least change that. And if you want a few other Slytherin girl names to replace Blaise with if you do, there's Tracey Davis and Daphne Greengrass.

    keep up the good story though!
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  • From ANON - Jenny on July 26, 2005
    This is pretty good. I just have a few notes. Ron's middle name is Bilius. You missed a few "Virginia"s when you changed Ginny's name. Blaise is a boy. That's as far as I've gotten.
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