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From ANON - thrnbrooke on November 16, 2005
Need chapter 8! If Drake Mallory is Draco and Jeremy Porter is this world's Harry then where is this world's Drake? George Warner is George Weasley? Wouldn't there be a displacement somewhere? Just wondering.
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From ANON - thrnbrooke on October 07, 2005
Need chapter 7! So many questions!
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From ANON - Missi on October 07, 2005
I just started reading this fic. I'm intrigued and can't wait to see where it goes.
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From ANON - thrnbrooke on September 19, 2005
It's Sirius! The one from Harry's world! Will he be able to return with Draco? What else does he have to do to be able to return home? Oh I can't wait for chapter 6! This just keeps getting better and better!
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From ANON - thrnbrooke on September 16, 2005
Sirius is there? The children brought Draco? Holy moly! I need chapter 5!
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From ANON - Teir-chan on August 31, 2005
To Shinigami:
Well I never said Hogwarts was safe... I mean I don't think it's NOT safe, but with a bunch of a ton of witches and wizards around, it is fairly safe. More safe than, say.. Privet Drive with teh eeebil Uncle Vernon and Dudly and Aunt Petunia. (Despite what Dumbledore said about it being safe for Harry, just from Voldy, really) Dumbledore KNOWS he should have told Harry, and had just.. not wanted to do it. Don't you ever procrastinate? *Is a terrible procrastinator.* He just felt like Harry was too young.. then it wasn't the right moment.. but he KNEWWW he should have told him sooner. Plus! I don't think Sirius is dead. ;-; I won't believe it. I mean.. there's no body. I say he's in another demension or some sort, you know? Anything's possible in J.K.R.'s world. BUT NO WAY WOULD HARRY HAVE BEEN ABLE TO SAVE CEDRIC! Seriously, they warped there, stood confused a moment, then suddenly ZOMGGREENLIGHTDIIIIEDIGGORY! Harry's a TEENAGER, not an auror. But, yes, Harry probably IS going insane.. slowly.. slowly.. watch time go by.. tick tock.. tick tock... You don't go crazy over night. The blood protection does work, but not much longer. Didn't you hear what Dumbledore said? How it's all like.. coming of age and stuff? I'm not gonna get my book to quote, so you could either take my word for it or go look it up yourself. I dunno if the Dursley's would turn Harry over, Dudly would, yes, Vernon probably, but Petunia.. I dunno... speculations, speculations. I think Dumbledore saw/sees Harry not as a /weapon/ persay, but more as a.. helpful person, who has a destiny? Like.. he doesn't HAVE to save England, and Dumbledore isn't MAKING him do anything, he's just basically guilt tripping him and since Harry is a Gryffindor who's "brave" but'll be so brave he'll do stupid things (which he's done) he'll do it. Harry wasn't PHYSICALLY abused, just mentally. Vernon /threatened/ the hit him a bunch, but never did. And Dudly is just like.. a bully.. and punches him, doesn't really beat him. Dumbledore left him with the Dursley's because of Petunia, and her link to her sister because of his mother's blood. Maaaagic, things work this way somehow. You don't heal from mental/emotional abuse, you just... get past it. If he wasn't abused like that, he wouldn't be the person he was today. Never know, he could have ended up like Dudly. AND THAT WOULD HAVE BEEN BAAAAAD! I like Harry how he is. He seems normal, to me. Did you notice that he didn't spend summer there that long any year? Couple months, etc. then he's off to the Weasley's or wherever. No one said he was fine at the Dursley's, did they? (Seriously, I don't remember it) Wouldn't YOU hate going there? And if you haven't noticed things are a lot better now. *Nods.* No more chores, Dudly isn't beating him up, not as much yelling. They just ignore him, basically. And I think that's better than other stuff. They're TRYING you know. Not hard, and probably not for the right reasons, but they are nicer than the first/second book.

o_o That was a lot. Whyyy did I have to respond to EVERYTHING you said?
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From ANON - Teir-chan on August 31, 2005
*Flops and dies and all sorts of stuff because Draco is teh smecks.*
Oh! Ands! Cons are teh greatest things of all ultimate time! *Flails.* But they're not much fun alone... u.u *Needs hyperactivesuperJapanlovingJRockobsessed friends.* Or friends in general. Anyways... *Dies.* I demand you make an awesome Draco costume and not one of those crappy ten minute thrown together ones like people have.

And! As for what you said to shinigami, about where Quirrel was... He had gone off to get some "Field expierience", remember? And Hagrid said he hadn't been the same since. *Has read first book far too many times.*
I really do think Snape is good... or it could be too many fanfics. But then again, I thought that about when Moaning Myrtle was talking about a boy crying in the bathroom, I just thought, "IT'S DRACO! HE'S SO ANGSTY!" But.. too many fanfics? I think not! Snape is good.. maybe not a COMPLETELY nice guy, but still. Remember when he opened the door to his house for Narcissa? He was smiling and was nice and stuff. Up until Wormtail came about... It's just a front, I say.
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From ANON - XYZ on August 23, 2005
Well, that's interesting. I wanna know what that thing is. Who's Tori, by the way? Why do those four know who he is? Please post soon.
Note: Taunting us with offers of Doujin links and don't give any is evil.
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From ANON - Aiko on August 20, 2005
This has a plot! I'm amazed (and a little grumpy, you know how long it took to find a story that wasn't all sex and had a little imagination to it? Or in your case, a lot?), and I also love this. *beams* So, naturally, I'm going to ask for more. Kisskiss!
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From ANON - thrnbrooke on August 20, 2005
What attacked! I need chapter 4!!!!
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From ANON - Shinigami24 on August 20, 2005
Fine, I'll hold off my opinion of Snape until the 7th book comes out. But I still stick by my original opinion about hogwarts NOT being safe! As for Dumbledore after the 5th book came out I stopped liking him! IF Dumbeldore had been total honest with Harry and trained him from day one, prehaps Sirius would still be alive! And Harry would have been able to save Cedric's life, in 4th yr! I'm shocked that Harry hasn't gone insane yet! He's been able to survive by luck, but WTF?! I doesn't get all those Horcruxes! And WHAT kind of power does Harry have?! Voldie has Harry's blood in him, so the blood protection doens't work! That if if it worked in the 1st place! The Dursleys HATE Harry! I even think they'ld turn Harry over to Voldemort! Dumbeldore obviosly seens Harry as a weapon to be used! If HE really cared about Harry he wouldn't have left Harry at the Dursleys to be abused mentally, emotionally and physicially! Harry can recover from physical abuse, but mental and emotional scars TAKE even longer to heal from! He having to go back every summer IS NOT helping in the slightest! I find it hard to believe that Harry was fine at the Dursleys, if he was fine, then WHY does he HATE going back there SO much?!
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From ANON - Hart on August 05, 2005
McDonald's?! How could you?! That would completely ruin his perfect complexion! Hrumph. Good, though ;)
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From ANON - Teir-chan on August 05, 2005
To Shinigami24 (even though you probably won't read this I wanna rant, too!)
Iiiii.. have suspicions about Snape. I mean.. seriously.. he had NO choice at ALL whether or not to kill Dumbledore. Since he made the unbreakable vow. And if you remember, he hesitated and stuff when he was gonna be all "Yes I will do Draco's mission if he fails." And such. AND! The biggest thing... What if.. Just IF.. he didn't do it at all? If he said some other spell that shot out a green light (I'm sure there's plenty) in his head. You know.. NON VERBAL SPELLS LYK OMG NOO I MEAN YESS?!?! You never know.. Seriously. Snape could be nice... *Pets him.*
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From ANON - Teir-chan on August 05, 2005
Maybe his/her hair was real.. I'm not too sure. I mean it LOOKED real, like lots of gell. Then again.. you never know. >.< I dyed my hair recently (not really recently but right after I did it..) and people asked if it was a wig because the color was so bright. So maybe it was.. a wig and just because I was at a con I thought it was real because I'm used to that sort of thing?
Nya! Anyways!
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From ANON - yami990 on August 03, 2005
this is really good please continue. bribes with cookie pocky and pudding.
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