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By : MyaMalfoy

From on August 01, 2005
OMG! Good story!
Please Please Please put more up.
It is too good to stop!

Lots of love!
-Zarah
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From ANON - Allison on August 01, 2005
AHHHHHHH I hate cliffys update soon please cause i am on the edgw of my seat...

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From ANON - ancientgirl on August 01, 2005
*sigh* I knew it was too good to be true. I like your story, but I'm praying you don't drag this angst out chapter after chapter. I'm sorry but I don't read angst, but I realize that sometimes a certain amount is needed. I'll give it a go for a bit and see how long it lasts. Good chapter though.
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From ANON - Pastel on August 01, 2005
I wonder who is the one helping Lucius. Is it Ron? Great chapter. Update soon.
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From ANON - Latricia on August 01, 2005
It's now 1:40 a.m and here goes the review; I'll try to make this quick as possible:

I'm actually not mad at you for this chapter, I actually love this chapter; excluding the letter part. I'll give you items in order.

I know for a fact that Draco would never hurt her, I mean he's Draco but then that damned letter had to fly in the room hey? *shakes head* So sad.

I don't think that Hermione should have blushed. If she didn't nobody would have guessed. They would eventually find out but not in the front of everyone at that time. But I like it, nonetheless.

Shit! I knew Ron would appear in the house. It just seems natural. Being that he is dumbwitted when it comes to certain things, he would forget the comment about him not coming back to the there at this rough time.

I had a feeling that Lucius was there; at Azkaban. He just had to be there. I see no other logical reason for him, Draci, to go there but i like the bubble idea. I wish i could use that sometimes, but it's never going to happen. *sighs*

Lucius' comment about Hermione's death reminded me of Harry's dream. I believe that could have been a premonition, and that could be one of the reasons why he couldn't remember it. *shrugs shoulders* It could happen

Omigosh! I almost had a mild heart attack when Hermione pointed her wand to Ron's bits and said "Evanesco." I am so serious about that heart attack. I had to pause the story to take a few calm breaths. I almost stopped breathing, and then i burst out laughing. I guess you better not piss of Hermione when she's mad. His bit's just shrivelled up. LOL If I was there I would have rolled around on the ground laughing because he couldn't do anything but groaned and cry. That is sweet revenge *smiles evilly*

I feel so sorry for Hermione. I mean, she gets a letter from Draco, stating that they can't be together, must have really torn her up because she had a nervous breakdown; but can even remember it. But what I can't understand is why she didn't suspect that, it seemed quite wrong. I mean he just told her he loved her before she left and then he sends her a letter stating that they should break up. She must have thought that there has to be a reason or something but i guess her love for him, blocked her suspicious conscience.

I can't believe Ron would try to portray Draco as the bad guy. Saying that he will break her heart and completely forgetting that he broke her heart the day before leaving her at the alter. What a jackass.

I actually know who the spy for Lucius is but, I'm not going to say it because it will ruin the surprise. {At least I hope I'm right, but not knowing if i'm right or wrong, I won't call the name}

I so happy you wrote this chapter. It makes some of my questions clear up a bit but I hope you write more.

xoxo

Latricia
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From on July 31, 2005
It is now 12:30 a.m. and I had to read this before i go to bed. So i'll try to write this as quick as i can.

Man. That was alot of crying. I mean, I know that you said that this Draco is nothing like the books and I knew that from the start, but Damn, I don't think I would ever see him cry that much. What a change, a good one, but a change nonetheless.

I like the comment when Hermione said that Draco and Ron are so different. They are like night and day. A few things flashed in my head and I was laughing.

Harry's dream was like whoa! I mean Lucius going to the wedding and told Draco to chose. I know Draco would die for her. Please don't make him, Draco, die. I would so cry. Anyway, moving away from the flipping dream now...

Thank you so much for putting the length of their marriage. It makes me more comfortable with the story. And it shows me that after 4 years of marriage, Ginny is still an independent woman. She has her husband wrapped around her finger, to an extent, and vice versa.

For Draco's childhood story. I was so shocked when i saw the word rape. My eyes almost popped out of my head. But thank Merlin you didn't write the details. I don't think i would have made it. I would have been bawling.

I was wondering what does Draco have to do at Azkaban Prison. Isn't Luicus dead (I can't remember. I think you did mention it, but...Forgive me if you have mentioned it before; which i'm sure you have.)

I wonder where Ron is and why he came back. What ever happened to the American girl he was suppose to go with on his wedding day. Did she leave him, he leave her; what?

I hope Ron doesn't try to do anything to Hermione while she is at the burrow. (I know he isn't allowed back there, but i think he can find other ways to get into the house.)

I think that about sums up my ideas for the time being. Expect more ideas/comments/etc. When the next chapter comes out.

Until next chapter

xoxo

Latricia
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From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2005
Thanks fo writing such a great fic! It was one of the best fics I ever read! I usually only give reviews to the fics that are really good. Please update soon. Thanks again!
I loved the you let the caracters express themselves on how they feel. You should really consider being a writer.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*Stephanie~*~~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
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From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2005
Thanks fo writing such a great fic! It was such a great fic. It was one of the best fics I ever read! I usually only give reviews to the fics are really good. Please update soon. Thanks again!

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*Stephanie~*~~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
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From ANON - KrazyKiwi on July 30, 2005
Oh no! I don't want to think about what Harry's dream means. Too ominous! It was beautiful how everyone comforted Draco in his time of need and I can't wait until he and Hermione are back together!
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From ANON - Stephanie on July 29, 2005
Another great chappie. Draco, you dork! Don't be pissed that she doesn't get married right away!
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From ANON - Jackie on July 29, 2005
Frankly your story makes me gag it's so sickly sweet. Draco is so out of character!!!
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From ANON - KrazyKiwi on July 29, 2005
Yea! You updated! I was so excited reading this. I knew Ginny would be a good friend and that she and Harry would understand. Again, thanks for writing it!
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From ANON - Elmo on July 29, 2005
loving the tears...a little out of character but HeY! thats wut fanfiction is for
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From ANON - Aunt Bijou on July 29, 2005
You are positively devious!! You are sooooo twisted! I love it! Heh heh heh... Can't wait to see what happens next! Now chain yourself back to that keyboard and WRITE!!!
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From ANON - Latricia on July 29, 2005
Damn. This story is getting better by the chapter. It is now...12:30 a.m. and I'll make this quick because i have to go to work tomorrow. I love how he, Draco, broke down when was classified as a best friend and the exchange of the words willy to pussy. So funny.

I love the slip up when Draco was in the bed with Hermione. I think they would make the perfect couple and I'm happy they got together; but... Ron is a completely different thing. I know that he's probably cooking up some scheme to get Hermione back or hurt if not physically harm Draco so Hermione wouldn't want him. I can't wait to see what he does.

I totally agree with Ginny. I think that punch wasn't only about Buckbeak, I think it was a combination of anger and sexual frustration of some thought (funny thought but could happen.)

I was wondering how long Harry and Ginny was married? I don't remember if you mentioned it before but i don't recall it.

I know that Draco couldn't have a good childhood. Don't get me wrong, this story shows his lavish lifestyle but he had no real friends. He only had dumbfounded nitwits and money-grabbging whores around him. I can't wait until he explains himself to the Potters in the morning.

This story is so going in my favorites. This is amazing and refreshing at the same time.

Why not take up writing for a side job. I'm not sure if it pays alot but you would sure sell alot. (just a thought. And i'll buy the first copy just to be fair)

Finally, I like how Harry tries to portray himself as the dominate on in his household (or at least his marriage) but i could clearly see that they are both neutral in the situation. And i like it.

Until the next chapter...
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