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Reviews for Hermione and Draco

By : MyaMalfoy
  • From Annecia89 on August 07, 2015
    Your first fic?! This was fantastic! Loved every minute!
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on October 24, 2011
    *looks confused and speaks in a squeaky voice* what? Boys can't have babies what?
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  • From jreel08 on December 29, 2009
    Got to say that I love this story. Would love to see it branch off into another set of stories (Ron and Snape perhaps, love to see more Dramione too). You never did explain how Ron is having a baby (girl parts maybe). Would make for an interesting side story. I would love a copy of the family trees too. Like where you went with the stories and I am excited to read more of your work.

    jreel08@yahoo.com
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  • From thehawaiianeskimo on October 04, 2008
    I agree with Gryffindor_slytherin about a lot of inconsistencies. But I absolutely loved this story...


    All the way up untill the last shower. How is it possible for Ron to be pregnant? Unless he was born with working girl parts, but then he would be a girl, rather than a boy.

    I dont know. I loved it all the way up till then.
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  • From mlui on July 02, 2008
    Well, this is a very lovely story. Heartwarming even. But...

    You seem to have used both British and American spelling--consistency, especially with snigger (British) and snicker (American), which was both used throughout the story. I don't think Ron would use the word "pop." Isn't that an American slang used in the '50s and '60s? (E.g., Mom and Pop, you used "mum" but then go on to use "pop"...)

    Also, there seems to be major plotholes. How did Lucius escape from Azkaban? I thought it was impenetrable...Sirius only escaped because he was an Animigus and there was a mass breakout previously because the Dementors abandoned their post and went over to Voldemort. Also, they didn't know who was betraying them before. Azkaban is Ministry owned, so couldn't the Aurors dig into the records of who visited Lucius while he was in Azkaban? Or ask the Warden? Shouldn't he be in a top security cell? How can he still have visitors, shouldn't that right be denied? How can Draco just Floo there? Isn't security really tight and you need to take a boat there because it's on an island ("in the middle of the North Sea")? When Fudge came from a visit from Azkaban after Sirius escaped, he was drenched in water (Book 6, chapter 1).

    Narcissa said Lucius is her ex-husband, then why did she want Hermione to call her, "Mother Malfoy." If she's divorced, wouldn't she automatically be reverted back to Narcissa Black? I know Hermione sees Arthur and Molly as her surrogate father and mother, but what about her own parents? Wouldn't they be insulted or jealous? I can understand if they've passed away, but they're still alive! Even if she did marry Ron, I can only see her just saying their first names...because doing so otherwise would just be insulting her own parents...er, how did you derive "Mya" from "Hermione"? Not that there's anything wrong with Mya, it's just that I can't really make the connection...

    I'm confused about the Heartbonding. If this existed (in a group versus a couple) because of the "Golden Trio," then how come Harry, Ron, and Hermione didn't feel it previously? And how can Hermione NOT notice something is up with Ron if he's been having an affair for three years?? It just doesn't make any sense if Hermione is the brightest witch in a century...

    But I really did enjoy reading the story! I don't mean to be too harsh, it's just the little things I notice and then as I read, I get confused...
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  • From sherrithewriter on October 11, 2007
    Good story -- some interesting plot devices. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.
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  • From bananasforyou on September 28, 2007
    cant wait!!
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  • From Tenar10r on September 27, 2007
    Just read the story straight through now that it is complete. Great story!
    Keep going with your writing and I'll look forward to your next one.
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  • From shelagh on September 26, 2007
    Wooo Hooo Great job Maya!!!! I'm so glad you finished but yet I'm sad it's over. Conflicted much?!! I'm looking forward to your next endeavor.
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  • From shelagh on August 26, 2007
    yayyyyy!!!!! I'm so gald to see you back Mya. I can't wait for the new fic!!!
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  • From slytherin21225 on June 27, 2007
    hi i have been readin ur story alot and i was wonderin when is Chp 15 and 16 gonna b up cause i would really like it if u please post it so i can read it

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  • From catysmom1028 on June 25, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From LoverofDarkness on June 25, 2007
    Please update as soon as you can.
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  • From angelnomiko on June 24, 2007
    wow that was great .. im glad they got there in time .. please update soon i would love to read more.. later for now

    angel
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  • From shelagh on June 12, 2007
    I'm so glad you are back!!!!!!!
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