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Reviews for The Muck and the Mire

By : madammalicia
  • From ANON - MICHELLE on August 08, 2005
    HEY! WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE. MAKE THE THIRD CHAPTER REALLY LONG. WE'LL BE SATISFIED FOR TWO WEEKS OR LESS. LOL
    PLEASE. I'M STARTING TO LOVE HERMIONE AND LUCIUS FANFIC.
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  • From ANON - Michelle on August 03, 2005
    If I can't read about the son, why not the father. I didn't hermione and lucius fanfiction could be so romantic, sexy dangerous and all of the above. update really soon, this my first time reading a hermione and lucius fanfic and I absolutly love it. update really soon.. I love this story so much. Even though i'm a hermione and draco shipper I'm starting to like hermione and lucius, also. Hope to here from you really soon.
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  • From ANON - pyewacket on August 02, 2005
    Really like the beginning. There are so few Lucius/Hermione stories out there and this one has promise. Can't wait to see more!
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  • From ANON - missgreer on July 31, 2005

    This is interesting, it left me with a lot of questions.
    Looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Maggie on July 29, 2005
    Woo ho! I liked it, Lucius is still in charecter and yet it is still going to be Lucius/Hermione. For a few seconds after the last lines I had visions of Lucius as a Step-father and it amused me. can't wait to read more!
    Maggie
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  • From ANON - Bambu on July 28, 2005
    This is a deliciously sly set up. Your extraordinarily self-serving Lucius is absolutely great. I totally loved the reaction to Doris' scream of fright... such sweet music to Lucius' ears! That was hysterical. I laughed at the perfect cruelty until I couldn't see the screen. I really look forward to your updates, and I'm delighted you've decided to damn the torpedoes (HBP, in this case) and full speed ahead!

    On a concrit note, your tenses are all over the place (present, past and past perfect) and sometimes even within the same sentence. When I started writing prose I did the same thing, but I now have a wonderful beta who catches all my mistakes (you should see the flog marks on my back!)
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