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Reviews for Snape Redux

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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 08, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 04, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - jo on November 29, 2005
    I really enjoyed this story - very well done! I would leave the bonus chapters as they are, I think they would work better as is.
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  • From ANON - v.esperas on October 06, 2005
    This is a superbly written and plotted tale; I have only reached halfway through chapter four, and I am enjoying it immmensely. You have cleverly taken on Rowling's characters and given them true verisimilitude. You have also helped me to make sense of the clues Rowling gives about the death of Dumbledore. I am relatively new to the Harry Potter novels, and extremely new to these fanfiction pages. I have never been moved to the point of submitting any kind of review or criticism of anything online before, so I hope you'll forgive me if I overstep the mark here...

    Please do not take the next part of my critique negatively; I assure you it is not intended that way:

    Although you are mostly getting the British English spot on, there are some Americanisms in your prose which grate in the mind of a very pedantic British reader such as myself. It may be that you do not care about these, and indeed, why should you? However if you are interested in having your work Beta'd (I believe is the term) by a reader who can point the solecisms out to you and suggest appropriate English alternatives, I would be very delighted, in fact honoured to be of service to you.

    Whether or not you are interested in my proposal, may I say again what a terrific story you are spinning here, thank you very much!
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  • From ANON - Ash on September 20, 2005
    Loved it! A great way to wrap up all the characters' endings! Awesome.
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 17, 2005
    You really have a knack with a story. The bonus chapters were great. Personally, I like the flow of Snape Redux without those bonus chapters embedded into the main story but that's just my opinion. Thanks again for sharing a super story.
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  • From ANON - AprilGrey on September 17, 2005
    Hi Barbara,

    Did you miss the chapter called Sandy White? Did you read the epilogue? This story is over, finito, kaput. Nothing more to update. That was a bonus chapter as in outtake. Thanks for your kind words and your encouragement!

    AprilG.
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  • From ANON - Barbara on September 17, 2005
    I am so into SS/HG fiction and this is good. Sad but good . I am looking forward to Severus becoming himself again and being with Hermione for the rest of their lives. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Mayken on September 16, 2005
    *Hee!* I loved this whole story, and the extras where great also.


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  • From ANON - LittleBird on September 13, 2005
    Awesome bonus chapter - can't wait for the second half. The hospital scene was realisitic yet funny all at the same time, and wow does Viktor have knowledge!! She could learn a lot from him!!
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on September 07, 2005
    Really love this story and hope to see more.
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  • From ANON - Medea on September 03, 2005
    I have to admit, much to my shame, that I hadnt read this story despite seeing it updating for weeks. Glad I gave it a chance tonight :) loved it. and the fact that dominating charectors reverse rolls in the bedroom is sooo true ,) A beautifully crafted story. I hope you right more.
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  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on September 02, 2005
    Been a great ride!!! I've so enjoyed your story! I hope you can continue to put out such great works in the future! Looking forward to more from you! Happy writing on whatever catches your fancy! Tengo que irme! Salud!
    Hugs and kisses always!
    Killer K :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 02, 2005
    Amazing story, I enjoyed the ending a lot.....very unexpected! Hope you write more good stories in the future! ~Joani
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  • From ANON - Jennifer Carter on September 01, 2005
    Thanks. I would've liked to have read a bonus chapter. Sorry I didn't make my presence known sooner. Being from New Orleans, I appreciate the prayers that people have been umm...praying. It's hell on earth. Within a matter of hours, my city had been turned into a wasteland.
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