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Reviews for Anastasia and the Slytherin

By : amypotter
  • From ANON - Anon on August 01, 2005
    I'm British, and I feel strangely ofended by this story. O_o Y'know, we're not all "Oh, I say! Perfectly smashing weather, what? Golly! Goodness, I appear to have a humongous bug up my arse! Oh well. Toodle-pip, old chap!"-esque uptight 50's movie rejects. And England isn't all "gray and dingy" - someone for the love of god tell me that this isn't how ALL Americans think!

    Oh, and this IS a Mary-Sue, seriously. It ticks all the boxes.
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  • From ANON - WriterLady1031 on July 31, 2005
    Honey, this is a Mary Sue. No matter how hard you try to defend it, this is a Mary-Sue down to the little bit of her being European royalty. People on here can see a Mary Sue a mile away.


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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2005
    Okay, Tom Marvolo Riddle/Lord Voldemort is the LAST descendant of Slytherin. Does you knowing the meaning of the word "last?" It means that your little Sue can't be descended from Slytherin. Also, I don't see anything in your very short chapter that makes it suitable for this website. Why must you force people to scroll pass this crap in search of decent fics?
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  • From amypotter on July 31, 2005
    How can you be racist to Europeans?! She's just defensive about her nationality, is all.

    She's NOT a Mary Sue. She has some really bad flaws, and they'll come out later when she explains about her past.
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  • From ANON - Disappointed on July 31, 2005
    Oh look, another mary-sue, but I see you've gone one step further and made her a mean hypocritical racist.

    We really don't need more stories like this around... good luck in your future writing.
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