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Reviews for Baby trouble.

By : jaymclg
  • From ANON - Riven on August 23, 2005
    so far your story is rather interesting, but i do wonder why it is posted on adult fan fiction rather than fanfiction.net
    there isnt any sex or adult scenarioes so far and i would really like to see the next chapter.
    actually i am looking foward to the sex scenes because that is what i come to aff.net to read.
    i read normal fanfiction all the time and im sure i would have found this story sooner had it been posted on a more main stream site.
    but please update soon
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  • From ANON - random person 32 on August 20, 2005
    i love your story, a very good story.

    please keep writing
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  • From Mdunlap on August 20, 2005
    I left you a review before, but I just wanted to tell you how much I like your story. There are almost 4,000 fics on this site, and I have read almost half of them. What can I say, OC in my world means Obessive Compulsive. I know drivel when I see it, and this is a good story. You have an actual plot, dialogue, grammar and spelling. I was actually excited because I thought you had put up a new chapter. I've had people criticize the way I write sex scenes (although I haven't been accused of sounding like I was 12), that my chapters are too short, that some of the characters get more sex than others (duh!), and that I don't know how to make pizza margaretta. It sounds like it's getting ridiculous, doesn't it?
    You work hard on a story, and then someone says a really mean, uncalled for thing to you. Sorry, love. You get a big hug from me.
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  • From ANON - eve on August 19, 2005
    your writing is atrocious. thank you for making my eyes bleed.
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  • From ANON - Cyn on August 19, 2005
    too short....please keep writing more...I just love this story and can't get enough of it....hehe....-Cyn
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  • From ANON - Abragini on August 18, 2005
    Yay! I have been waiting for new chapters. I was definently suprised when i saw that there was two new ones!! yay! Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Cyn on August 18, 2005
    too short....no fair...I love this story......Harry and Ginny are my favorite.....hurry up with the next chappie .......which I hope is alerady underway...-Cyn
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  • From ANON - Sara on August 17, 2005
    pla write more...That was so cool how they both changed into birds but when will they change back?

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  • From ANON - Cyn on August 17, 2005
    I loved this chapter and I do hope the smutt is coming really soon...-Cyn
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  • From ANON - Sara on August 16, 2005
    i know im reviewing twice in one day and I just wanted to say that is a good chapter and plz write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sara on August 16, 2005
    So far so good......I told u i was gonna review after i read the new chapter
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  • From ANON - Cyn on August 16, 2005
    I love Harry being so tiny.....he's soo cute...hehe......love the plot and it's so sweet that Harry and Ginny are soulmates....hehe....I'm a sucker for happy endings and I hope this story will do just nicely....keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter......I'm just imagining Severus groveling for forgiveness to Serena.....hilarious....hehe...-Cyn
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  • From ANON - Confused on August 15, 2005
    Cool idea but i'm not sure why it's on "adult" fan fiction
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  • From ANON - Sara on August 11, 2005
    plz write more...I would like to read more of what happens..I think it is really rude what Draco did to Harry...
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on August 11, 2005
    *LOL* Well I think Draco's paying the price right now, given Blaise broke his nose and Snape gave him detention!
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