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Reviews for Mary Sue Comes to Hogwarts

By : TCardan
  • From kylanSB on February 16, 2012
    oh petalsoft petalsoft, where art thou petalsoft. i really regret not reviewing your stories anytime sooner, consider i been your fan for almost 4 years now, i only start writing back reviews when realizing how much it matters. it's a shame really as many of your stories are my all time favorite, especially this mary sue series. i know i'm only one reviewer, but i hope my words can reach out to you and bring these chapters in ur mind onto papers (and virtual chapters :D )

    afterall you haven't done harry's lessons yet ;)
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 06, 2011
    Oh my god, I totally want more. The chemistry you write into the story is awesome. Amazing. I'm totally gonna be following this story. Also, my fingers are crossed for no sad scenes like her getting taken away.

    Where this story has left me feeling --
    Relationship-wise: I really want her to end up with Draco or Blaise or Seamus (they all seem like good matches for her, sex-wise.. experienced, take-charge, sexy, devious), minus Draco/Blaise hating Muggles. I'm also hoping that the person she ends up with fights for her (eg. Draco vs Blaise, Seamus vs Draco+Blaise). Seamus seems different from the rest of the Gryffindors, devious and experienced, but also manly and strong, and could totally fight off Draco/Blaise for her. If they ended up together, that would make my life.


    Sex-wise:
    Really hot scenes with Draco/Blaise/Seamus (individually) taking charge of her, please! Like snatching her away into the Forbidden Forest, secret passageway, under the bleachers of the Quidditch field, and have her begging. For Draco/Blaise, I really like the threesomes she has with them, but it'd be really cool if she had alone time with one/both of them. Also Seamus, when he has his 3 nights with her.. man, I am REALLY looking forward to that.


    Overall:
    Amazing! Was just looking for smut, but this is so much better. Great plot, good character usage, I'm totally hooked.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 06, 2011
    Chapter 5 - Crying at Snape's mean words.. genius! And, oh my, I hope the Gryffindors fight for her.. I love that she's slutting around.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 06, 2011
    This story is incredible! I really like it, great job!
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  • From Nexides on November 08, 2010
    I hope you finish this story someday. I'm definitely enjoying it! The fact that you have a bit of plot in there makes it much more interesting, too. And I like how she's actually helping them to get the girls they want.

    It occurred to me that if you had summarized it as just a muggle getting into Hogwarts and helping the boys get with the girls they like (through sluttiness! :D), I would have just passed by the story. But the fact that you specifically named her Mary Sue totally caught my interest, so good job on that.

    I hope to see more of this some day!
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  • From SummerLove on October 07, 2010
    omg i love this story i have read it millions of times!! when are u gonna add another chapter???
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  • From ANON - VeronicaWayland on July 25, 2010
    Whyever did you drop this story?! It is so funny!
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  • From Amandajane on November 02, 2009
    * Giggle * Love it.
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  • From umudanny on September 08, 2009
    This is really well done. Do you plan on continuing at all?
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  • From ANON - thyrokio on May 27, 2009
    The story was really good, it would be nice to see more of it.
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  • From oliversangel on November 16, 2008
    Awwww, Petal, you've GOT to continue this. PLEASE!! I love the cheekiness of this story. The whole concept of poking fun at Mary Sue stories. I ADORE the fact that you named her Mary Sue Perfect. The whole story is very clever, her being a muggle, the boys doing everything in their power to keep her there. I love that she's a nympho. We get to read about lots of yummy sex with everyone, and no angsty journey to get there. It's a nice refreshing, satirical (sp) change. And yet, there is still a plot. Suprisingly enough. LOL. I love your style of writing, I'm currently reading all your works. I fell in love with WAWN, and its sequel. I wouldn't mind waiting ages for updates for another sequel, its that good. ^.^ You definately have a way with commanding your readers attention that way love. Anyways, I must know the conclusion to this story. Ooh, I love that she helped Neville. He hardly ever "gets any", and not only did Mary Sue pop his cherry, she taught him how to please women, and how to be sexy and flirty for Susan. Do we at least get to read about ONE night with each of the boys? That would be yummy, and I agree, Draco/Blaise threesomes are very yummy. And yes, I appreciate the fact that Pansy didn't go all pyscho crazy on Mary Sue, and how she wanted her too....Nice change. Everyone hates poor Pansy, and she always gets "fucked", so I was glad to find her a bit more likeable in this story. Anywho, can't wait to read more, I will leave you a proper review on the other stories when I am not rushed. I almost read WAWN in one day, but when it got to be about 4 am, AFF did their daily update thingy, so I just went to sleep and finished it in the AM, LOVED it by the way!! XXOO
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  • From sentineljandb2 on October 30, 2008
    I love your story, and look forward to the next update!

    Harry is going to have more trouble from Slythering, if Draco and Balsie find out about his private lessons.

    What will happen when people fin out that she has no magical powers? Will it be Hermione that unmasks her? Hermione is so jealous I don
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  • From bookworm708 on October 30, 2008
    Wow, this was so totally amazing! I can't believe I read the entire thing so fast. I totally love your use of the Mary Sue thing...it's hilarious and awesome. I hope you continue writing soon, I can't wait to see where you take this next.
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  • From ANON - samantha on June 24, 2008
    I love this!! I was a little skeptical at first, the plot seemed a little far fetched. But I'm hooked! You write beautifully. I can't wait for the next chapter. Although I am sad she's becoming hesitant towards my two favorite Slytherins. Blaise and Draco... mmmm. I'm looking forward to Harry next! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2008
    UPDATE NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW

    ha. pwease.
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