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Reviews for hogwarts:a life after and the next generation

By : irisalou
  • From ANON - Smithy on August 31, 2005
    Holy crap! Look above the number 2! """"""""""""""""""""" Speech marks, fucking use them! Dipshit
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  • From ANON - Elmo on August 06, 2005
    its an interesting concept but the characters are starting to confuse me and the story barely started!

    just make sure that the fic IS a draco and hermione one...

    keep it up! i wanna noe what happens next

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  • From ANON - Nicole on August 05, 2005
    I hate being mean, but I was wondering if english was your first language? Because if it is you suck at it! Try reading your story over before you post it, becuase it is really hard to read, I couldn't understand what you were trying to say. There are words that don't belong and many that are miss spelled. And in stead of telling us about the charaters before why don't you tell us who they are in the story. If I were to guess I would say your young, by the way you are writing, but if you are young what are you doing on ADULT fanfiction. It looks like you have the writing skills of a 9 year old, even they might be a little better. Try re-reading the story before you post it, it might help.
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