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Reviews for Survival of the Fittest

By : Looneyluna
  • From ANON - Anguloce on September 21, 2005
    glad to hear things are going better where you are. stay strong, and stay awesome. all of you down south are in our prayers. btw, thanks for updating! finding time to write has gotta be hard.
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  • From ShilohDarke on September 21, 2005
    Oh! Good Chapter! I am completely seething! I can't wait to see what happens next! I can't believe she just left him there! I am so glad that one of your people came out with no major damage to their home. Now there's Rita. My mother lives about 50 miles outside of Houston, so I am keeping my fingers crossed that everything will be ok. They haven't called for an evacuation where she is yet, so maybe that is a good sign.... Anyway... Love the story, love the new chapter... Anxiously waiting for more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2005
    OMG, I can't believe she just left him like that.....it's obvious he wants her more than what he's saying, but i guess one can be blind like that. I can't stand cliff hangers, but I suppose it keeps the curiousity stewwing, Please update soon! ~Joani
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  • From ANON - lemonade on September 20, 2005
    You know, I am actually glad she snuck away. It would have been too sudden of a change for her to just give in to Albus and Snape. Snape doesn't get sympathy yet because he hasn't told her how he feels. Keeps me wondering how he'll deal with it.
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  • From ANON - amsev on September 16, 2005
    Lovely tension watching two very stubborn characters throw sparks off each other. I'm almost starting to feel sorry for Albus as he wonders if Sev and Hermione will ever bury the hatchet.

    I hope all is going smoothly with your aiding victims of the hurricane. Thank God for folks like you that are on the spot, there and able to help. All those people without homes made me think of my parents when they were forced to leave their home and come to the U.S. after WWII. My prayers are with you and the people of Louisiana.
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  • From ANON - Cheryl on September 13, 2005
    Fantastic! Amazing! Excellent! My absolute favorite yet. You really have a wonderful, easy-to-read style that just flows and keeps readers interested. The tension and humor is wonderful, and you've captured the characterizations fabulously. I know you are busy with more important things right now but hopefully you won't keep us waiting too long and we can see what Dumbledore thinks about the turn of events!! Thanks for your efforts. I hope to see more stories from you.
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  • From goddessnape on September 13, 2005
    wow! that was amazing..lol. Well, I just hope that you updade soon, maybe you can find some time even in between your work. I'll be patiently avaiting your next update :)
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  • From Ms_Figg on September 12, 2005
    I love this. Very funny, very tension filled ... I couldn't wait for the consummation. Have added this to my recommended reading list. Looking forward to the next update. Bless you for your work with those who have been displaced by Katrina. Heaven has a special place for people like you.
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  • From ANON - ShilohDarke on September 11, 2005
    Awesome Chapter! It was an intense moment when they finally let themselves give in to their desires. I loved it! Please update when you can. As to what you are doing in Real Life... The poor people deserve someone who actually cares as well as you obviously do. May God bless you for what you are doing. May he also bring each of the victims peace...
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 11, 2005
    I have been enjoying your story, it has been providing me with an escape.
    I am from Louisiana and would like to say thank you for your help with the Katrina victims.

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  • From ANON - cat on September 11, 2005
    take all the time you need, its a better cause than sating our desires as a fan, i love your work this was a very good chapter i throughly enjoyed it finally they got it on ^_^ please update as soon as you have a chance, thanks
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 11, 2005
    Your title is rather ironic is it not regarding what you are dealing with in your area of the States. It is a terrible thing and one I didn't fully appreciate until our area was hit with a force 3 hurricane that was supposed to be a force 1. I feel for those affected greatly.

    Now your story, specifically, the last chapter...it was wonderful. Your sly sense of humour makes me laugh when I read it and this chapter is no different. I'm glad they finally got together...teehee, especially since several of Hermione's deep seated desires were fulfilled. I'll look forward to the next chapter but your RL work is far more important than our wish for the next chapter. I don't usually do this but ((hugs)) and take care.
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  • From ANON - snapescat on September 11, 2005
    Thanks for the update.

    Good luck with your relief work. I live in Scotland and we have bad weather at times but nothing as extreme as the Southern states have experienced. Our thoughts are with you and the victims of Katrina. There is so much positive and good work going on, and all the media focuses on is who is responsible. The victims are ordinary people like you and I who just want to live and enjoy our lives with our families and friends. Please let them know that there are people thinking of them and praying for them from far away. Good luck.
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  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on September 09, 2005
    SMUT! SMUT! SMUT! Soon, por favor!!! You're killin' me, girl! Such a tease! Happy writing, and update soon. Please! Tengo que irme! Salud!
    Killer K :p
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  • From ANON - Anguloce on September 09, 2005
    this is both hysterical and hot at the same time, i love it! please Please PLEASE update soon!
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