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Reviews for Survival of the Fittest

By : Looneyluna
  • From ANON - KatelynXM on August 12, 2005
    sorry typo, on above review, i mena aren't not are. me likey story will u post more soon pleez?
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  • From ANON - KatelynXM on August 12, 2005
    yaaaay you posted more.. i love this story so much, funny and well written. i like how i havent seen a snape pov, and how its kept to hermione and dumbledore, cuz severus's actions are lot more funny and meaningful when his thoughts are shown. dont know why. u good writer. sev and hermione 4evah! did i mention that you captured dumbledore perfectly also?
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  • From ANON - firewall on August 11, 2005
    You updated! and so quickly. LOL I can just see them going at it in the library...Mme Pince would have a hissy fit! Thanks for sharing your story...hope the next chapter comes as quickly!
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  • From ANON - cherie on August 11, 2005
    I love this story!! It is so funny and I can not wait to see what happens!
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  • From lysa1 on August 10, 2005
    Hehe! This sounds SO promising. And very well written, too. I am looking forward to the next chapter. I luuuuv it when SS/HG starts out hating each other...
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  • From ANON - Me on August 10, 2005
    A great start. You have a really good writing style, and your story flows well - I look forward to more! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sarah on August 08, 2005
    great story. update soon!!!:-)
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  • From ANON - anonymouse on August 07, 2005
    Love the story so far. Please keep it going. I can't wait to see where this goes.
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  • From ANON - Moi on August 07, 2005
    Well begun is half done, isn't that the saying? I like your first chapter, and I hope there's more than one to follow!
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  • From OnlyInThisLight on August 07, 2005
    Awesome! This story is how do you say it? Charming? yes, it is witty to boot. I like how i read through the entire chapter and not one part was boring. your style of writing and ability to keep characters in character kept the plot moving at a good pace while still allowing you to understand every word of it. now, if i may - ahem:

    PPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZZZZZZ PPPPPPPPPPPOOOOOOOOSSSSSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTTTTTT MMMMMMMMMMMOORRRRRE SSSSSSSOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    Hee heee, immature enough for ya? sorry, couldn't resist!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on August 07, 2005
    I really like the look of this story, i hope you keep at it!

    by chance do you do emails to notify people when you update? sorry bit lazy, i just don't want forget about this story
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  • From ANON - Vampire_Exotica on August 07, 2005
    Can't wait for an update. I really like this first chapter, it's always fun when they start off hating each other. Don't let them fall in love to quickly if that is the way you intend to go. I can see you having some fun with this one!
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on August 07, 2005
    Excellant, absolutely excellant!

    Glad you are ignoring HBP - and i hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - firewall on August 06, 2005
    First, allow me to compliment you on your well written chapter...it's so nice to read a well edited story with close attention being paid to grammatical structures. It makes your work so effortless to read because your reader can focus on the story.

    Second, this sounds really promising. I very much enjoyed the premise of the story. I hope you update quickly as I can't wait to read more.
    Thank you so much for sharing it.
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  • From ANON - June W on August 06, 2005
    Ch 1 - very nice first chapter! I hope Severus gets to eat soon - he's too skinny to miss any more meals. Very cute trick, to befriend Dobby! Do I dare ask if Harry and Ron survived the war too? Looking forward to updates!
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