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By : keenanrules
  • From Barbadianking89 on August 09, 2017

    The story is great, I feel the hostility from Lupin towards harry shouldn't be there seeing the fact that Lupin was friends with Harry's father. Other than that the story is solid, and it would be great if you finished it. Best of luck thinking up new chapters.


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  • From Hedwigseyes on May 24, 2009
    I am afraid a lot of things don't make sense to me in this story. I like your take on things but by no means does the story sound finished. I must say I think that Lupin, Ron, and Ginny are out of character. I like the story don't get me wrong. If you continue the story let me know. I will even help you come up with Ideas for it if you wish. For the record, I have read all 7 books and Dumbledore only guesses the power that Harry has is love, and it could very well be ancient magic instead.

    The Devils Advocate,
    Hedwigseyes
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  • From radiofishlips on August 04, 2008
    ok so im loving the story so far .. i especially like the plot twist with Mione's father qur question im waiting to see answered is is a for real asshole nasty guy or is he under a curse and if he is under a curse will they figure that out before harry goes off the deep end and slaughters him for what he has done to Mione??

    keep it up
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  • From BlueMan2010 on July 03, 2008
    absolutely great work. Each chapter is better than the one before. Keep up the great work. Very creative and worthwhile read.
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  • From todraw13 on October 22, 2007
    i love this story.. i know you havent writen since 05' but if u ever continue it please let me know.
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  • From on December 15, 2006
    More please i love this story MORE!!!!! ooo and as for angeldust forget you ok this is a good book why dont u read past chapter 5 and then come back and comment .
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  • From ANON - Brittany on January 11, 2006
    Hey great story! Are you going to be adding more, i want to know what happens. Like who has the 4th power. Thanks
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  • From ANON - Wolf on December 20, 2005
    More chapters or a sequel. Please more.
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  • From ANON - Steven on December 12, 2005
    This is an amazing story. I really hope you continue it and i hope the next chapter comes out soon!!!
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  • From ANON - adam on November 28, 2005
    i have read all 11 chapter i enjoyed them greatly i love your story so much and am looking forword to reading more
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  • From ANON - adam on November 28, 2005
    i have read all 11 chapter i enjoyed them greatly i love your story so much and am looking forword to reading more
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  • From ANON - DarkKitty311 on November 25, 2005
    Ok im mad Angledust go fuck your self you have no right to flame peple if you havent written a story !! it just shows how immature and childish you are !! and if you have nothing better to do go read HP4 and stop harrassing this author because your review mean nothing to to him/her so fuck off !!!
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  • From ANON - DarkKitty311 on November 25, 2005
    OMG Love it love it have to update soon ! You capture the characters so well in your writing. you are easliy seen as a very talented writer !! Great story and hope to read more soon !!
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  • From ANON - Dumbledorefan on November 19, 2005
    Hey R.A.B....I know there are some people out there that do not like your story and I know you are demoralize by them but let me tell you this,beeing human,it is natural but do follow what your heart tell you no matter what other says. Each individual's mindset is different and im sure you know that there are some out there who like your story.For all you know,it could change someone life for the better. I must stress on the word FANFICTION and im sure that everyone knows what it means. There are worst story out there that holds no meaning.I support you all the way even if you do not continue the story but please do continue the story untill you end it.


    =people make mistakes but they make a bigger one if they don't learn from it=
    remember that.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2005
    really great storyline when are you going to put the next chapter up i cant wait to find out what happens, youve done really well you should be proud
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