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By : DB2020
  • From ANON - kurtcouper on September 25, 2005
    Oh i love you! But my heart breaks a little to hear that kitten is gone. I want to know more about this massive magic energy and why Draco changed sides. Keep up the wonderful work!
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  • From ANON - Kristal on September 24, 2005
    hehe its me again!! still lovin the story!!
    update ASAP!!!
    thnx byes
    Kristal
    (emails) ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sunny on September 24, 2005
    Yeaaaay!!! You continued!!!! Great chapter...Draco is adorable...just keep the chapters coming cuz I love this story!!!
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  • From ANON - angel on September 24, 2005
    that was great i love how kitten told him that they loved each other .... please update soon and in till then keep up the awesome work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Sunny on September 23, 2005
    I have just read your story and have to say that I really enjoyed it. You have done a really good job with each of your chapters in terms of slowly but surly developing not only your plot (which is freakin great by the way) but also your characters. I like how they are in love already...but true to their characters are unable or unwilling to admit it even to themselves....the whole "angelus" thing, with "KITTY" coming out and every now and again is very smart on your part....how you show us Hermione's basic nature...her raw self, its great...it reminds me of a veela type story without everything being all neat and tidy...I mean Hermione must slowly come into her power...she must realize it and come to terms with her other self....its pretty deep...How she seems to be two people to draco, but in reality is one and the same, just parts in conflict with each other (or so it seemed to me)....I love the romantic aspect of the story...its great...but I think the entire story overall desires mad applause...I'm clapping for you right now!!! (I know I'm a dork)

    I understand how college can make it difficult to keep up with other hobbies....I mean what with parties, hanging out, sleeping in, football games, oh yeah and classes...it can be tough....but I really hope you continue because you are very talented and seem passionate about not only this story but improving your talent as a writer in general...and more importantly I love your story and I need you to complete it and not let a faithful reader wait too excruciatingly long for the next update....I'm pretty sure your other readers will agree!!!
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  • From ANON - Kristal on September 22, 2005
    oooo!! i wanna know what dracos powers are!!! oo please tell me!!
    hehe...wht else is going to happen!! i wanna know everything!! hehe
    please update ASAP!!!
    hehe
    thnx
    Kristal
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  • From ANON - angel on September 22, 2005
    man i i love it please more more keep up the awesome work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Kristal on September 22, 2005
    OMF!!! the story is still GREAT!!!!
    sorry i havent been reviewing..its that my mother took away the net...so i couldnt come on and read!! hehe
    but i still love the story!! hehe
    update asap!!!
    k thnx bye
    Kristal
    (emails) ^_^
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  • From ANON - killisandra on September 21, 2005
    i really like it so far. Can't wait for more. Draco seems to really protective of her and i like her attitude with him as well, their personalities are working really well together. That was really cool about the vampires and the missing students. I really liked the descriptions of Mantra Druids. Anyway, i think it's going really well and you should keep going with it.
    Blessed Be,
    ~Sandra~
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  • From ANON - kurtcouper on September 17, 2005
    Oh how sweet! Draco being a knight in shinning tarnished armor. Remarkable. I truly loved this chapter. I can't wait to see what the "Kitten" does when she takes over Hermione's body. She's so inhibited; I'm sensing trouble! Sometimes the golden trio (- Hermione and + Ginny) are too bloody annoying. Keep up the wonderful work, love. You're such a great writer. I was too excited when I found the story already updated for today.
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  • From ANON - slykitten on September 16, 2005
    i think that this is the best fic on this site. I just don't like how unreasonable Harry and Ron are being, i don't really see them as being *that* bad. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - shell on September 16, 2005
    Great Chapter. I'm holding my breath till some more action comes. lol. This is a great story.
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  • From ANON - angel on September 16, 2005
    wow .... draco is her knight in shining armor ..... i cant wait in till next update sooooooooo please update soon and in till then later

    angel
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  • From ANON - Lily on September 16, 2005
    awesome! waiting for more soon! ~Lily
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  • From ANON - kurtcouper on September 16, 2005
    I was looking for a good Draco/Hermione story and came up empty handed. Then I spied your lucious fic, not really sure what I was getting into, and wow. Amazing! I'm so glad I decided to take the plunge. I was first surrounded by less than par one-shots that was filled with unfufilling dialogue. But this story is so refreshing! You write with such passion and the way you describe things...it's unlike anything I've ever really read. The plot is extremely thick and twisting, which is completely insane-I love it that way. There's so much going on that I can't control it. I want to know why Draco's on the "good" side and I want to know when he's finally going to tell her she's beautiful. And I'm so bloody glad for that kiss! What passion. I love how she's an angel. It's too perfect. For some reason, which is horrible, but I picture a really cheezy Hermione with Michael-like wings coming from her, looking ridiculous. I don't know if I read anything about wing span, but just exactly how huge are these? Rediculously small or mamoth sized? Anyway, that was bugging me. Please continue this quickly, I need to know what's going to happen soon. I need answers! Any more missions? Maybe some talk between the two? Some more heated passion? Oh, this has to be one of the best DM/HG stories I have read so far.
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