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Reviews for No Longer Helpless

By : DB2020
  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on August 30, 2005
    I'm dying for more! It has just got better and better.... Such talent and creativity... Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Kristal on August 28, 2005
    i love your story!!! please update asap!!
    oh and if its not much of a bother...would u mind emailing me when u do update?
    my email is: Kristal_Cerveja@hotmail.com
    Thanks!!!
    bye
    Kristal
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  • From ANON - Tris on August 25, 2005
    i really like the up-date.
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  • From ANON - Jenn on August 24, 2005
    Well now... I love slimy old men and the boys who love to protect us from them. :) Your story truly is original in its mesh of many fic ideas. You've brought everything together in one coherent story and I'm loving the wild ride.

    Just a quick suggestion - try breaking up your paragraphs a little more often. This last chapter took an effort to read due to the length of passages in the narrative. I know it's exposition, but there was so little dialogue that it seemed like an intermission to the rest of the story. I hope this helps because you have the ideas and you're already a wonderful writer; I guess it's the English teacher in me that wants it tightened. :)
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  • From ANON - Eddie the Black Maru on August 24, 2005
    SCHOOL IS NO EXCUSE!!!!!!!!!! NONE NONE NONE NONE NONE NONE>>> AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
    this could possilbly be the best, simply the best, hermoine draco fic out there and if you don't update i shall march up and tell your teachers so. your creative genius MUST NOT BE HELD BACK BY THE TYRYANY OF FOOLISH AND PRUDISH TEACHERS.
    damn. i so wish this wasn't the last chapter (for now-it had better be updated, yup yup!)
    much love
    Eddie
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  • From ANON - bob on August 24, 2005
    Whoa....that was freaking amazing!!
    I can't wait for your next update, seeing as how this story is progressing rather fast, I'm even finding it hard to keep up!! And thats saying something 'cause I hardly ever miss a day of looking on AFF.
    I've loved every single chapter that you've come out with since I haven't reviewed....the kiss, jump and wings bit was very exceptional.....and Harry and Ron are extremelly clueless....if you hand all information to people on a silver plater, you will never be sure of their comprehesion, clearly this never donned on the boys!
    Soooooo...I'm gonna keep looking at this story right till the end! I hope school goes well for you...and that you will still have time to write, of course :P
    keep up the awesome writing
    -bob

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2005
    yeah i didnt like the beginning part of the chapter, too much info for me. I liked the endingthough!

    Please update soon
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  • From ANON - mia on August 24, 2005
    Another great chapter. I do have a suggestion though. If you go into long description like that try to break up the paragraphs a little better. It's easier to read when it's broken up, more manageable somehow. Anyway, great chapter, can't wait for more. Good luck on your classes.
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  • From ANON - Andraea Shade on August 24, 2005
    Interesting detailing. I like this. Can't wait for your next chapter. ///_^
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  • From ANON - killisandra on August 22, 2005
    you can't leave it off there!!!!!! What happens next???? Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on August 22, 2005
    Wow! Great chapter! I am on the edge of my seat... I think you described Harry and Ron perfectly. Of course who knows what the future holds. Can't wait for the update!
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  • From ANON - Mia on August 22, 2005
    I'm so curious now! You have to write another one and let us know what's going on. lol. Great chapter. I can't wait to find out what's going on.
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  • From ANON - Andraea Shade on August 21, 2005
    Umm. I want more. please.. I know this review isn't helpful.. but i like this story a lot. please keep it going.
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  • From ANON - Andraea Shade on August 21, 2005
    I want more.... I guess I'll just have to wait. *sigh* Oh well. This is an awesome story.... Keep it up please.
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  • From ANON - elisha on August 19, 2005
    man! i am sooo in love with this story!!!! please update soon! i was really glad that their attraction was real and not a "side effect", i liked how you showed that. MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!! :)
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