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Reviews for No Longer Helpless

By : DB2020
  • From ANON - Krystle on August 19, 2005
    Hey Darlin,
    This story keeps getting better and better, I absolutely love it! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Kirsche on August 19, 2005
    *bada ba ba baaa, I'm lovin' it*
    That sounded really stupid, but that's all I can think of saying in regards to your fic.

    I'm also psyched that you update so frequently.
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  • From ANON - slykitten on August 19, 2005
    That was wonderful! Sigh, Draco is such a sweetie, but I love how he is still in character. This story is coming along nicely and I can't wait until the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Lexx on August 19, 2005
    Hey... I just want you to know how much I love this story it's awesome really! This HAS to be THE BEST fanfiction I have read in a long time! Honestly keep up the good work...
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  • From ANON - shell on August 19, 2005
    I love your story! It's got plot, and the kind of slow tension that makes a romance story worth reading. The characters are endearing and realistic. Please, please, please keep it up; I'm addicted.
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  • From ANON - Bob Saget on August 18, 2005
    YOU FAIL AT LIFE COMPLETELY!!!!!
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  • From ANON - intcrimgrrl on August 18, 2005
    I really like this story, and am glad you explained what happened in Gringott's in this chapter. I have to tell you, however, that the author's notes in the middle of the story don't add anything and are very distracting. The story is very, very good, but those threw me right out of it each time there was one. They're really not necessary in the body of the story - perhaps you could place author's notes at the end or the beginning?
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  • From ANON - WriterLady1031 on August 18, 2005
    Great story! I'd like to read more if you have it. I love the detail and interaction between the Draco and Hermione as they try to figure each other out. Also, great writing style--it flows so smoothly from one part to the next.

    I'll be looking out for more, so keep going. ^_^
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  • From ANON - bob on August 17, 2005
    MY GOD!!! THIS STORY ROOOOOOCKS!!!!
    sorry I get a little over excited about new things
    I think this story is so awesome it puts all others to shame!
    The plot is original and the characters are as well portrayd as JK's.
    And I LOVED the kitten thing! and I still havn't read chapter 9 or 10...but I will!! I've just been a little laid up and I wanted to tell you how awesome your story was before I forgot.
    And your updateing skills are PHENOMINAL!!! :D
    -bob
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on August 17, 2005
    I enjoyed the last two chapters immensely and I must say the tailing trick from moody was brilliant. I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - slykitten on August 17, 2005
    I love how the relationship between Hermione and Draco is forming. Nice and gradual, they dson't suddently fall in love. Makes it seem more realistic. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - slykitten on August 15, 2005
    Snape is such a dirty old man...lol. Good thing Draco was there. Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on August 15, 2005
    Draco the reluctant hero. Be still my heart. Sleeping in his arms, wearing his clothes, sharing broom rides. If she hadn't just lost her parents, I'd say she was having a hell of a summer.
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  • From ANON - pyro on August 14, 2005
    Beautiful story. Absolutley wonderful, sweet caring and a bit of sadness- perfect.
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  • From ANON - sullicn on August 13, 2005
    Love the story so far! Please keep it up!
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