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From ANON - linoy on July 28, 2006
wonderful amazing beautiful.........
so please, please i'm begging u continue the fiction :-) ^_^

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From ANON - angelicallydemonic on July 27, 2006
Hey,

i reviewed twice before i know, but this is the eighth time i've read this fic and i wanted to review again. This is amazing work...i really like it. in fact (i don't know if you received the e-mail or not) but i nominated your fic for a multifaceted award. anyways, i'm reviewing again to BEG you for a sequal or at the least a longer ending. i just keep leaving the story wanting MORE. (i've already read the 36 chapters so i'm talking about the actual ending...i think it's a little to abrupt). anyways, i have to say (again) this is my FAVORITE fanfiction of hermione/draco ever and i said that in your nomination. feel free to e-mail me (i'd be absolutely delighted if you did actually) i've read this fic so many times. i LOVE your Draco...he's exactly how i would imagine him. again, thanks SO much for writing this fic. i absolutely adore it.
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From ANON - linoy on July 22, 2006
please continue....

amazing fiction....
i'm so love this fiction is't the 6 time i'm read it
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From ANON - Anon on July 16, 2006
i have been waiting for an update and searched this story on google - this site has the rest of the story
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2521875/28/
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From ANON - Amy on July 13, 2006
T_T When are you going to update this??? I think you kinda had some updates up not too long ago, but you deleted them... so I'm like past this chapter, but i don't remember what i read!!! But I love this story!!! It's so cute! And good.
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From ANON - skit on July 02, 2006
You are such a good author this story is so good i really liked the part where they went to druids mantra
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From ANON - gevfuan on June 19, 2006
Good story. Should be interesting to read the rest. You planning any updates soon?
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From ANON - yummydraco on June 16, 2006
i am a gr8 fan of you work and hope u continue to write more D/Hr id luv 2 see more of ur stories about them...this fice ended ......there are no word 2 describe it just amzing im still in shock when i can think of better thhings to say ill post more
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From ANON - angelicdemon on June 15, 2006
Hey! This is my favorite fanfiction of Draco/Hermione. (Pansy's Volcano is my second favorite). I've read it seven times thus far and I love it more each time! When are you going to write a sequal? You really should...and soon! I've been waiting for a continuation for FOREVER! Or, if you don't want to write a sequal (and I must admit, the story is pretty complete the way it is) then I sincerely wish you would write another Draco/Hermione fiction. I really love Draco's character in this book and his interactions with Hermione. I love how he interacts with Moody too! Gosh, he's absolutely dreamy in this fic! *falls on knees and clasps hands in front of you* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE A SEQUAL OR ANOTHER FIC SOON!!!!!!!!!! PLEAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

angelicdemon
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From ANON - yummydraco on June 14, 2006
i love this story and it gets better everytime i read(which really isnt possiblle since its so great already), anywaypleeez post the whole thing im goin crazee nex time u post make it alot pleeeeeeez
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From ANON - yummydraco on June 11, 2006
im soo glad u updated like i said this a great story and one of the better one out there so pleez continue

**no smut yet but iz okay because i love this story**
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From ANON - Leeree on June 11, 2006
Ack! Update! Cliffys are not nice!!! :D
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From ANON - shalamonde aka lala on June 11, 2006
H'lo me again. Befoer you knash your teeth in annoyance. I found your original fic in th read only archive, and I was wondering if there was any substantial differences between the two. If there are then just gives me another good excust to read your fic again and again.
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From ANON - shalamonde aka lala on June 11, 2006
Give me a U! U! You've got yo U! You've got yo U! Give me a P! P! You've got yo P! You've got yo P! (Please) Give us a DATE! DATE-- when you'll Update! when you'll update. Update! Update! Update! We demand an update! Yay!
Do you see what the angst is doing to me? It has me in a cheerleading frenzy. How pathetic is that especially when I loathe cheerleaders... ok well not all cheerleaders --just--just the stereotype--cuz I have friends that are cheerleaders... welll nevermind... . Anyway , um, I digress. For someone who is only ( I say only because your skills in story composition, in my opinion (DUH) put you at the level of an established author) an aspiring author you are really talented in plot sequence... You are (excuse the valley girl use of the following word) LIKE a climax genius (no pun intended... ok maybe just a little) and you haven't even added the smut. The other stories I've reviewed ( not many beyond a few I assure you) have had an undeniable likeability about them . I mean the situatutions or prompts were original in a sense. The style of writing was definitely hekpful in the scoring department, but none so far have floored me with the plot. UR fic has put me on an emotional roller coaster, one I don't want to hve to get off for a lopng,long time ( just joshin bout the long bit--- chuckles). From the introductory scene, to the nail-biting climatics (ex. Hermione's run in with the death eaters and the ghoul creature in the basement), to the "fluffy" (rather more poofy than fluffy--I mean you can't help but go aww at some parts), your fic has seized my attention and has yet to give it back. As a matter of fact, your fic can keep my attention til the end if you so choose to keep em comin ( the chapters that is------me and my unintentional double entendres that make no sense at all) Understand? Probably not. I wouldn't if I were you, reading this and you weren't me. LOL. I'm rambling, purposively and unintentionally. It is 1 am afterall.. In short, you rock. BUt please update soon. Must give the props on the 17 chapters you've posted so far. That was pretty quick. I read them all in one sitting. I just couldn't stop reading. My eyeballs must have been glued to the screen because everytime I tried to look away they ached. I'm serious. Time to give the rest of this review page to your other admirers. I just wanted to give you all the appreciation you deserve and more. cheerio.
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From ANON - Leeree on June 10, 2006
Awesomeness! Please update soon! :D
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