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By : DB2020
  • From ANON - cleopatra on October 12, 2005
    OMG! Cliffhanger! Im loving this story - its developing in a very interesting way. Please tell me you have more written and are just waiting to update! Ill be looking!
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  • From ANON - Kristal on October 12, 2005
    uncool!
    a cliff hanger!!
    i want more! u cant do this to me!!!
    PLEASE update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
    hehe
    thnx
    Kristal
    (emails:))
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  • From ANON - AZCatFan on October 10, 2005
    Thank you for updating! Ron & Harry's reaction was spot on! I can hardly wait for the final battle!
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  • From ANON - Bulma on October 10, 2005
    ok...I got to chappy sixteen and I saw that you had started the better paragraphing. Thank you *bows*

    Keep up the good work!! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Bulma on October 10, 2005
    hey, I really like your story it's well put together and thought out and I love the characters. There's just one little problem. Your parapraghs are too long and it makes it really hard to read sometimes. I think I'm only on chappy 13 and it might change in the later chappys but for future reference, remember that a paragraph is actually five or six sentences sometimes less and maybe a little more but not as huge as what you are doing now. But remember you story is really good, 'cause I'm still reading it and I only read the best. You have great grammar, and again I like how you describe and write about the characters it's very good. Thanks for writing the story.

    Later,
    Bulma
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on October 10, 2005
    Definitely a tense chapter - I am dying for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Serentipity01 on October 10, 2005
    Every time there is a new chapter up, it just makes my day! Thanks! I love that Hermione is rapidly developing an 'experimental streak', so to speak ;) AND I love that you're bringing Blain back - stroke of genius, that! Keep it up, You're creating something absolutely beautiful here :)
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on October 09, 2005
    Wow! Blain again! I love Blain! He's funny... can't wait to see what Draco has in store for the vampires. Anyways, impressed and loving this fic as always!
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  • From ANON - angel on October 09, 2005
    wow now there out and they dont have to hide from the order.. i cant wait in till next time in till tne keep up the awesome worka nd later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Sunny on October 09, 2005
    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What a chapter....i love this story...and I am so glad we got to "see" the love between them.....Thank you for reading the reviews....you are a great writer and I would have continued to read whether or not you had included the more intimate scenes or not...but I love the fact that you actually read your readers reviews and have responded in kind to their many demands!!! not many would have done so while still remaining true to your story and the characters....this chapter and especially the love scene was written so beautifully...please keep writing I can't wait for the next installment!!! Thank you for responding so wonderfully (and so quickly too I might add) to your readers needs!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kristal on October 09, 2005
    ahhhh!!! hurry up and update!!!!!!
    i want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    please update asap!!
    i still want to know what dracos powers are! why havent you elaborated on it yet?
    (i finally remembered it when im posting!)
    thnx
    Kristal
    (emails:))
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  • From ANON - intcrimgrrl on October 09, 2005
    This story is building so nicely - I have particularly loved the last three chapters. Starting with Draco's drunken declaration, his confession, and the public declaration. I can't wait to see where you take this next.
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  • From ANON - AZCatFan on October 08, 2005
    Yes. Exactly. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on October 07, 2005
    Brilliant as always! Glad to see the couple finally got to work out their frustrations ;)
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  • From ANON - Kristal on October 07, 2005
    yey!! 2 chapters!!
    why oh why wont you tell me what dracos powers are?? please!!!!!!!!
    i wanna know more!!!
    keep the updates comming!!
    hehe
    Kristal
    (emails:))
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