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By : DB2020
  • From ANON - angel on October 07, 2005
    hahahaha that was great and now draco we know what made draco change sides man i feel sorry for him ... well now he has mione and they will be there for each other ... i cant wait in till the next chatper and in till then keep up the awesome work ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - lilycat on October 07, 2005
    Just wanted to drop you another note- I thought the bedroom scene was very tastefully done. It's a personal choice, and if you prefer not to write the "lurve" scenes, I think that you made a good decision. We still get a lot of the connection from the hints at it and the scenes surrounding the actual event. I think it's great that you dealt with it so gracefully. I have been known to write a smut scene or two (or lots) but I often think they wind up detracting from the romance, and I think that you wrote the whole scene beautifully.

    Catherine
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  • From ANON - kurtcouper on October 07, 2005
    Oh I can't wait! They finally pronounced their love and we know why Draco turned "good", if you could ever call a Malfoy good. And I know something dramatic is going to happen during the battle. Eee,
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  • From ANON - Sunny on October 07, 2005
    Sorry but I had more to say...umm I have to agree with AZCatFan it was a little sucky that we didn't get to a more in depth look at their "FIRST TIME"...I mean I loved how you set it up and everything...it was very tastefully done...very cute very sweet...but I wish we could've had a little peak inside that bedroom!!!! Having said that I still absolutley love love love your story and can't wait to see how everything works out!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sunny on October 07, 2005
    Wow so much has happened in these two new chapters..and I love it!!! They confessed their love for each other..the Order is going to strike first..Hermione's the bait....its alll so freakin good...I love this story...I know I say it everytime but its true....please please please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - AZCatFan on October 07, 2005
    Ohhh...two chapters!!! THANK YOU! Oh....missing the bedroom scene...major bummer...not just for the smut either...I mean...what about their *connection*. Was he tender? Was she nervous? Did she trust him completely? Did she cry? Did *he* cry? Even if you are not comfortable with the gory details at least let us into that moment with them...we have waited so long...been so patient. I really hope you reconsider and add to your story...I think that by skipping to the shower scene you are really missing out on an opportunity to show us yet another, deeper dimention of their relationship. I mean...you gave us 30 chapters of really incredible build-up to that scene...then you left us on the outside of the door. Boo Hoo for us. Other than that you are still doing an amazing job and I look forward to reading more...soon I hope!
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on October 07, 2005
    That was a brilliant chapter - well done for getting it up so quickly!
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  • From ANON - mistyeyes129 on October 07, 2005
    oh yeah! thats what i'm talking about great chapter keep updating!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - lilycat on October 07, 2005
    What a romantic scene- I loved when Draco tells her "You're mine for the taking." I'd be his for the taking...

    Seriously- well done- it was very sweet and melancholy when he breaks down at the thought of losing her. Great job!
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on October 07, 2005
    Yay! Go Hermione!

    And damn Order meeting from interrupting Hermione and Draco!!!!

    Hehehe.... and that bit with Draco hurting Moody - so subtle - brilliant!

    I look forward to your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on October 07, 2005
    Chapters just can't come fast enough... I am glad they are going to take an offensive stance, as it is rare to see that in a fic. Damn Moody for barging in on poor Draco and Hermione, he should pay for that!
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  • From ANON - lilycat on October 07, 2005
    P.S. I LOVE your Draco/Moody interactions. I have never read anything like that before and it is such a great idea- it is really fresh comedic value.
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  • From ANON - lilycat on October 07, 2005
    Just read your update- that was SO hot! Poor kids- what am I saying- poor me! I was so disappointed for them.

    I loved the flashback to the night before- it was one of the cutest things I've ever read. I love the way you've written Draco's inner dialogue- it's wonderful.

    Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - angel on October 06, 2005
    dang they were soooooooooooooo close but noooooooooo they had a meeting to go to blast it .. i hope the plane works the why theywould like and i cant wait in till next time in till then keep up hte awesome work ..later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Kristal on October 06, 2005
    haha dracos drunk!! and moody is comic! awesome!
    update asap..i wanna see if draco goes to hermione drunk and tells her he loves her!!
    thnx
    Kristal
    (emails:))

    p.s.: we're both reading Catalyst..isnt it a good story too??!!?
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