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Reviews for Don't Touch Me

By : mistressmeo
  • From ANON - NAR on December 31, 2005
    I flipped out for a good five minutes after I realized I missed an update.
    It was a bit short for my tastes, but I respect that people have lives. Had it been longer, I think it would have been better. No longer as in dragging that scene out, but exploring more, perhaps showing us more of what Hermione felt or thought before she left him in bed. Perhaps you could have developed a small plot point here?
    Still, well done as always, though I winced at the end.
    Had you been anyone else, I would have stopped before you tumbled into the cliche: Pansy sussing Hermione out and then so forth, but I trust you to keep it consistant (that sounded like a threat, I assure you it wasn't) to the previous chapters.
    Please, email me when you update?
    Great job.
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  • From ANON - Frank on December 31, 2005
    Well, this chapter was a little too short, but at least you did update it.I hope hat you can update soon. And do a larger one and with some more action, sex.
    Frank
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  • From ANON - beep on December 31, 2005
    So Hot!!!!!!

    I love it. This is moving along perfectly. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - 0o0itznitelite on December 31, 2005
    AWW... DAT WUZZZ GOODD... U NEED TO UPDATE MORE/E
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  • From ANON - Mia Yuki on December 30, 2005
    I love it. please update soon.
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  • From Peaches79 on December 30, 2005
    I think it is great and always look forward to your updates, I am always happy to see the human side of Draco (Yum!) Congratulations on the baby!
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  • From ANON - Mel on December 30, 2005
    This in fantastic...I'm craving your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on December 30, 2005
    amazing.bloody amazing.couldn't stop reading.please continue.dying to know what happens.
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  • From ANON - Tandy on December 30, 2005
    IMPERIO!!!!

    OKay, come back here and finish writting this fic!!!!

    (REally loving this!! Wow!!!)
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  • From ANON - Jenn on December 30, 2005
    *applauds* Even with a babe at home, you still manage to pull out the hardcore angst and sexual tension. I love it! You are wonderful, my dear, and whenever you post again, I will be ready to read.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2005
    i love it!! i am hooked!!! update soon!!
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  • From ANON - kazfeist on December 30, 2005
    Excellent job, as usual. Keep up the good work! As to the story numbers, they show up in my address bar. Maybe it's a function of Internet Explorer? I dunno :)
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  • From ANON - Vicky on December 29, 2005
    Wow, this story is amazing!! I originally came reading to pass some time but got completely sucked into the plot and the smut...ugh it's amazing! Please update soon..that Pansy drama has me on the edge of my seat!!
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  • From ANON - Michelle on December 29, 2005
    What do I think? I think I'm delighted to see an update! Thanks!!! The story is very good - lots of UST, lots of juicy lemons, and now a pissed off bitchy Pansy. What more can a girl ask for? Rest, relax, and dash off a few more words when you get a moment. I'll keep waiting!
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  • From ANON - Steph on December 29, 2005
    Your story is great! I can't wait for you to update! The story number is in the address bar. It says http://www.adultfanfiction.net/aff/story.php?no= ____
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