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Reviews for Feelings and Trust

By : avihenda
  • From ANON - Lin on August 15, 2014
    The 'Ron arc' was a little long, but I think that was mostly due to it being multiple chapters. I really liked the story line though and am sorry that it was never finished.
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  • From helewisetran on June 12, 2007
    update? plz
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  • From ANON - DN on July 24, 2006
    This is probably one of the best new Harry/Draco stories that I have came across in a good while. Don't worry about the spelling errors, I myself am an awful speller. Though I would like longer chapters and please update soon. Thanks. DN.
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  • From ANON - MaddiChan on July 23, 2006
    This story is good but your spelling is pretty bad. You missed "Dumbledore" and easier words like "does". (You spell it 'dose'.) Also: those four chapters you spent with Draco going to see Ron was a complete waist, espically the one where he just walks in the room and studies him. That all should have been one chapter.

    Otherwise, it's okay.
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  • From ANON - evalhanne on July 16, 2006
    This is an interesting story and I enjoyed reading it. I do hope it continues, many of the H/D Master/Slave stories are usually one-shots or severely incomplete.
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  • From ANON - Jace on May 29, 2006
    More! Greedy Jacey wants more. *laughs* Seriously. I'd love if you'd write more.
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  • From ANON - KeyKeeper12 on May 01, 2006
    Interesting enough, I'll be looking forward to more. One small problem stuck out though. I know this is fanfiction, but be careful not to make too many scenes unecessarily Muggle i..e. bathroom scene probably wouldn't have used hands to drain water, and doctors are call healers in the Potter universe. Minor details, but a good job other than that.
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  • From Kiira on April 13, 2006
    I like this story, and I was very happy to find it again, I hope that you'll continue soon =)
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  • From ANON - L\'etje on April 09, 2006
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - Sarah on April 08, 2006
    I really like your story! And you said something about not being able to write due to having a lack of adultfanfiction.net stories and I totally agree with you. I wish that the people who run this site hadn;t of done that because alot of great stories were lost and there aren't that many authors who are going to upload their stories again. It makes me upset that I can't find but a few good stories on here to read.
    ~rah~
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  • From ANON - vblum12 on April 08, 2006
    This is really good! But what happened to Hermione?? I need to know, I think we all need to know! Who has her? What happened to her????
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  • From ANON - RandH4ever on April 07, 2006
    This is a GREAT story so far. However, you need a beta desperately. I'm willing to do it for you. E-mail me at kirsten56@lycos.com.
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  • From ANON - Phoenix 5 on April 07, 2006
    It' short!!!!!!! But I'm glad to be able to read it because I waited so long...... With all the wait ot have this new site!!!!!
    I hope that this will work as well.

    Please keep going...
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  • From ANON - helewisetran on January 24, 2006
    Yah, u update. Oh I have wait for so long. This story is GGGGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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  • From ANON - Alison on January 24, 2006
    No, you're not that bad spelling/grammar-wise. You're writing is very clearly understandable and there were no glaring mistakes in that last chapter. Since you're that good all by yourself, I'd prefer to have the story earlier instead of having to wait for it to be beta'd. =o)

    Great chapter, by the way. Hopefully Ron will end up relatively ok.. =o)
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