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Reviews for Harem Nights

By : Sorwyn
  • From ANON - chocs on August 10, 2005
    Hey! This can turn out to be great! I like the plot, reminds me of another amazing fic. Anywyas, just a thought (PLEASE don;t take this negatively), the old english makes it hard to read and the flow becomes choppy. I know why you wrote like that, but just a request, maybe you could write in plain english. I think that you can suck your readers into the old world without the messed up sentence structure. Great fin and a great idea! Please post more soon.
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  • From ANON - Me on August 10, 2005
    I think that so far the story is well written and its good to see you building a story instead of jumping right innto it. Do hurry on an update though as I am really interested in seeing how this goes
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  • From ANON - emma on August 10, 2005
    hey this story sounds really good i hope you update again soon
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  • From ANON - myniephoenix on August 10, 2005
    good... well set up for a plot based smut story... looking forward to it.. :)
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