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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Fortress of Woe

By : Mishra
  • From ANON - BZLF on November 20, 2006
    Finally the Fortress returns! A good long chapter. A good update. Although right after the Fortress of Woe appears and Ron Ginny and Hermione walk out, you said the three seventh years. Should've been two seventh and one sixth year. Anyway, besides that, mostly error free.
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  • From ANON - kratos on November 19, 2006
    another fine chapter this story gets better and better I look forward to the next one bye and thanks.
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  • From ANON - BZLF on November 15, 2006
    Thanks for answering my question. Your doing great with these updates, your grammer has vastly inproved from the original. They're also quite long, which is very good. I liked the Potions idea and same goes for Proffesor Diana. Overall I'd still give this a five star rating for each chapter, both for the old version and for your remake of the chapters and story.
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  • From ANON - BZLF on November 13, 2006
    Excellent update. I don't remember a Professer Diana last time, but if I do remember correctly, Harry will teach that other lesson for the sixth and seventh years. Good to see an update again and please do update soon!
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  • From ANON - BZLF on November 05, 2006
    You're doing a great job so far. Alot better than the original chapters were.
    I look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - lothous on October 29, 2006
    nice story if there is more i would love to read it
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  • From ANON - Link Jones on August 26, 2006
    This is a bloody good story full of love humour courage all the good stuff. But i'm not a writer so i can't truley say just how good this story is. thank for the great read and i also really enjoy the squel keep up the good work. PS sorry if i miss spelled any of this my spelling isn't to good.
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  • From FLZB on January 28, 2006
    Congratulations on writing such an amazing story! I am glad you're going to make a sequel(sP?) to this, and i hope its as good if not better than Fortress of Woe!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 12, 2006
    Hey, this is the first Review I have ever written, but I have been reading this site for a very long time.
    I am writting this to tell, what you wrote was a brilliant story. I am quite impressed.
    Take Care
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  • From ANON - Master Of The Poke World on January 04, 2006
    Sad......:(
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  • From ANON - Yami on December 29, 2005
    This is by far the best story i have ever read on this site, i thoughaly congradulate you and all that ... this was amzing and if you make a sequal I will read thanks again for the entertaintment
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  • From ANON - Olwen Corby on December 29, 2005
    You've got some good ideas here, but there is room for improvement in your writing style. I recommend using italics or single quotes for internal monologue, or you can just shift perspective to write the story in 1st person as Harry. At the moment private thoughts and verbal comments read the same in your writing. Also stop to consider each character and their personality before you write their dialogue. I doubt Ginny would bother to compare Harry to a "Time Bomb" if she doesn't know what one is. Some of the best fun of writing fan fic is trying to figure out colloquialisms and references that are appropriate to characters in a fantasy environment. Perhaps Harry is like a "Time Delay Incineration Charm". Give it some thought, if you'd like a bit of help drop me an email.

    Olwen
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  • From ANON - Master Of The Poke World on December 28, 2005
    What do you mean "The End?????".....Why are the question marks there???Are u planning a sequel???Anyways terrific way to end the story
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on December 28, 2005
    I thought the Yule Ball only occurs when there is a triwizard tornament.
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  • From ANON - random person 32 on December 27, 2005
    bravo, a very well written story.

    i hope to see more fics from you.
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