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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Fortress of Woe

By : Mishra
  • From ANON - Cyn on October 03, 2005
    I simply loved these last two chapters.......I wondered how Sandro going to kick some ass......and when Hermione and Ron are going to tell Harry about their relationship......much luck to your next chappie and hope it's on it's way....-Cyn
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  • From ANON - vonHardenberg on September 30, 2005
    You seem to have the basics of a very winning story. There are small grammatical errors, but they can be ironed out in the proofreading. I would advise avioding swearing, scatological, curseing or profane words. The right use of these almost always requires the feel of a native speaker. There is enough difference that I as an American would feel uncomfortable trying to do it in a British story, I would need advice from a native speaker of standard English and vernacular common to the UK. I feel however that your English rendition of an original story is of better quality than the German translation of the HP series put out by the Carlsen Verlag. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - TheAngelOfSilence on September 27, 2005
    Hi, just wanted to let you know that your story is brilliant,very readable and I like the addition of your own characters.
    It's nice not to have to endure plotless smut all the time, though it has it's place of course!
    Especially good seeing as English is not your first language.(what is your first language, out of interest?)Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Cyn on September 20, 2005
    oic.....i makes much more sense now......no not the dreadful teasers......why!!!!!.....hehe.....waiting for you to update sooner....-Cyn
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  • From ANON - BZLF on September 20, 2005
    Teh cruelness! Teh absolute cruelness of how short that was;It is severe!
    *waits for Update, like a good little reader >_>*
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  • From ANON - Madelyn on September 20, 2005
    Hi! I just started reading your fic and I like what I'm reading so far. Please write soon because I'm anxious for more!
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on September 19, 2005
    Thanks for keeping in touch with us. Butt kicking by Sandro but I hope he doesn't cause a major character death.
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  • From ANON - Saico on September 18, 2005
    Not a bad story, although rushed, specially on the subject of bringing Harry and Ginny back together. The smut was nice.
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  • From ANON - BZLF on September 18, 2005
    I must say, this is turning out to be a quite interesting story, and i eagerly await your next update like i do the real seventh book. Congrats on making such an interesting plot so far, as well as the well detailed Sex scenes.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on September 17, 2005
    I hope one of the Aurors or Harry come up with a way to detect and defeat the assassin pretty soon.
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  • From ANON - Cyn on September 17, 2005
    I really liked the last chapter....the mood and setting was great.....can't wait to see what the mysterious shadow has to do.....waiting patiently but anxiously.....-Cyn
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  • From ANON - Sea on September 11, 2005
    Good job with correcting the spelling and grammar! Much easier to read now! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Cyn on September 10, 2005
    first of all I want to say that I completely love your story and love your style.......hope your add another chappie soon .............this story going to be a hot one...hehe.....-Cyn
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  • From ANON - the infamous JMarie on September 06, 2005
    Very, very interesting. I can't wait to find out how it will play out. Good luck!
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  • From ANON - Sea on September 05, 2005
    Your story is interesting! You might consider breaking up the dialog of various characters into separate lines. Otherwise, it all tends to run together and it is difficult to differentiate which character is speaking. You might also consider having each chapter run through beta before "publishing". There are quite a few grammatical and spelling errors that detract from your otherwise fine story.
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