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Reviews for Harry and Hermione's secret

By : masterofdarkness
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 21, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 23, 2007
    Okay, I read a few lines of this story and that was enough.

    First of, here's how you write a conversation.

    "Oh dear god, this story is utter crap,' said the offended reader.
    "Oh noes, that can't be true,' said the author.

    Yeah, that's an example.
    It was terrible, please fix it.
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  • From ANON - Dorian on October 24, 2006
    Oh dear god...
    I think I might die of shock.
    Would you mind giving me the adress of your english teacher because he/she has got to die.
    This is, probably, the worst fanfic I've ever read.
    When there's conversation you put " around the things they say.. .Here's an example.
    "Wow, The story Harry and Hermione's secret sure sucks, ey Ron?" Said Harry.
    Apart from being horribly written, the conversation is also unrealistic and plain stupid.

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  • From ANON - Your a moron on August 08, 2006
    Fucking sucked. Learn how to fucking use periods, commas, and capitalization! Stupid idiot.
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  • From ANON - yo on December 16, 2005
    pretty good story. could use a little work though











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  • From ANON - nbkmb on December 09, 2005
    good story

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  • From ANON - theparisian on September 25, 2005
    Okay, so maybe this could use a little work. Punctuation, and spelling errors could very easily be fixed, and to say that your dialogue needs work would be a serious understatement. You need to have correct Grammar in your title as well. It should read, "Harry and Hermione's Secret Revealed" All proper words capitalized, and an apostrophe (a "flying comma" because I know you're english skills are lacking) to show posession. It's not the secret of more than one Hermione, it's the secret that belongs to Harry and Hermione.

    Maybe you should think about taking an anatomy class. And having sex or watching porn or reaching your thirteenth birthday. Real sex doesn't happen like that. Even Porn sex doesn't happen like that.
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  • From ANON - SpiritMage on September 18, 2005
    Wow...this is story is a piece of shit. The punctuation sucks and the grammar is horrible. And do us all a favor and don't review your owns story.
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  • From ANON - buff kitty on September 02, 2005
    Hahahahahahahahahahahahahhaha!!!! You are so fucking lame! i oticed that a lot of the good revies u recieved(like 5)were written by yourself!You should hav hanged your email dipshit.PS:i hope some1 ties ur penis in a not so when u hav to piss it explodes...dumbass.
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  • From ANON - abob on September 02, 2005
    omg this fic sucks.really.are u even 18? its like a child with no knowlage in literature wrote this.PS:I hope u die from having too much shit in your head.

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  • From ANON - ghfcxh on August 30, 2005
    this was a good story!!!
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  • From ANON - dffgjss on August 29, 2005
    What the shit is this, asscakes?
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  • From ANON - brando on August 27, 2005
    it was good
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  • From ANON - Alex on August 23, 2005
    Ummm wow maybe this story would be decent if you took a writing class that was a piece of crap.
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  • From ANON - dark on August 21, 2005
    good

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