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Reviews for Gleaming Gray

By : DHsexlover
  • From ANON - okubyo uzumaki on August 19, 2005
    hello there!! hmm...this was a good start for your first fic! easy to imagine in your head. one suggestion though, pleeease space the paragraphs with 'enter' between them so it's easier to read! i know i'm not the only one who will decide not to read the story if all the paragraphs are smushed togeather...>.>;;; *sweatdrops* i mean, it could be the best fic in the world, and i'd never know 'cause it hurts my eyes to strain them by trying to figure out where i'm reading *mutteres about weak eyes* but other than that, i expect that you'll be able to do great things in the future with this story!

    ~Okubyo Uzumaki
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on August 18, 2005
    Oh I can't wait for chapter 4! What was with the look? What will Dumbledore say?
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on August 17, 2005
    Think Harry is becoming a sex starved teenager! Can't wait for chapter 3! Voldemort was standing in the Forbidden Forest? Why? What does he have planned for Harry?
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on August 17, 2005
    Interesting beginning! I can't wait for chapter 2!
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