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Reviews for Unexpected Love

By : DeirdraDomain
  • From ANON - Alexa on November 04, 2005
    Okay, so I'm confused: Why - if they expected Harry's condition to be so bad that they'd need to administer medical aid in a matter of minuted when they went to save him, and they would have to be oh so fast - they didn't go right away but decided to have a long conference, some hurt/comfort, and then go to SLEEP?! How tired did they have to be - comatose? And if they were (which, from their ability to talk, they probably weren't), are there no energy potions in the wizarding world?

    And even before that - with the twins - didn't see much hurry in their actions, even though they had witnessed Harry screaming, and it seems that they knew what was happening exactly (Snape did ask if they knew that what was being done to Harry would kill him, and they agreed that they knew that).

    Also on an earlier point - the letter from the kidnappers had enought references pointing to A-Harry's schoolmates, and B-Griffindors, that anyone would have bothered to inspect that angle in an investigation righ away, and adding the fact that the letter was infused with strong emotions which would generaly only come from a close person - most likely candidates being Harry's well known friends, it is very unbelievable that no one put 2 plus 2 together right away - there were adult, smart, industrious, ex-spies, Death Eaters reading it, after all.

    I hope you don't take this too hard, I didn't write this to cause you grief (though, admttedly I'm a bit heated right now), I did try to ignore all these things for a couple of last chapters, closing my eyes to anything plot-related that didn't really work, but it just got to be too much for me - I ended up having to skip portions of this last chapter just to keep reading (so I'm sorry if my first critisism is unfounded and there was a valid reason stated somwere in the middle of all the leisurely chatter for why they couldn't go righ away). The earlier chapters with the romance you did very well, they were a pleasure to read and beautifully done, it's just your mystery writing skills that need more fine-tuning.
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  • From ANON - sbkar on November 04, 2005
    Very good chapter twelve! The characterizations were nicely fleshed out. Oh, you need to change from "Shacklebot" to "Shacklebolt"...I somehow don't picture Kingsley as a robotic kind of guy...
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  • From ANON - amanda on November 04, 2005
    update soon great chapter.

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  • From ANON - Rain on November 01, 2005
    This story is amazing. I beg you to post Chapter twelve soon! ;)
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  • From ANON - jesso on November 01, 2005
    o that is evil!
    i like it
    lets kill the beaver and weasel and weaslet
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  • From ANON - Missi on October 30, 2005
    OMG I love you and your fic and your car insurance! This chapter was amazing, I so want that fucking Granger bitch to be in a world of pain!! *cough* Don't know where that came from but let's just put it back, shall we? *scrambles to hide insane twin out of sight* Ahem, anyway, I don't mind it being late, and take whatever time you need for the remaining chapters-it's still an amazing fic!
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  • From ANON - yoblossom on October 30, 2005
    *eye twitch* can you please, please, please have those three killed off sometime for what they're doing to harry?! PLEASE! they need to DIE!!! I can't wait until friday now... *chews finger nails*
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  • From ANON - Storm on October 30, 2005
    Great chapter, I can't wait to see how Harry fares after this, Ihope 'Sev the Magnificent, Omniscient Master of all things Liquidy and Foul-tasting' will be able to save Harry and bring him back. And I can't wait to see how they make all 4 of those idiots pay.
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  • From ANON - sbkar on October 29, 2005
    All that Hermione and company have done to Harry, he's NOT going to be the same as before...
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  • From ANON - jess on October 24, 2005
    i hate griffendors!
    dumbledor in perticular
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  • From ANON - TyRisha on October 23, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! those stupid bastards! and that manipulative old coot! damn them to the nth level of hell! poor harry. they have to go rescue him asap before miss i-think-i'm-so-smart and her delusional best friend and daft sister hurt him! go write more, i wanna see the Malfoys, Blaise, and Snape kill the whole lot of them.
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  • From ANON - elizabeth annette on October 22, 2005
    Those stupid bitches.....I hope lucius kicks their ass!!!!
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  • From ANON - Missi on October 22, 2005
    I am so angry at the idiots involved! What're they gonna do with Harry's dead body? I can't wait to see angry blond's get ahold of them!!
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  • From ANON - yoblossom on October 22, 2005
    KILL THEM ALL!!!! THEY ALL MUS DIE!!!!! Except for the Slytherins. They can live.
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  • From ANON - sbkar on October 22, 2005
    I don't see the Malfoy men holding each other and crying; Lucius was the right-hand man of Voldemort and a spy, thus, he'd be planning and scheming. That's too out of character.
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