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Reviews for Everything I Do, I Do It For You

By : sbrande
  • From Shellnet on September 18, 2019

     Could use an epilogue  with maybe  they got married Hermione became a teacher to and they had three kids cute no epilogue 


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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 10, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 21, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From darkmoonriseing420 on March 28, 2007
    That was by far one of the best HP fics I've read.

    ~Dark
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  • From redheadfaerie on February 12, 2007
    alrighty, so ive spent the last day or to reading this fic and i must say that i loved every minute of it. so much so that i have to go to bed right this second as i have to be at work in about fiva and a half hours!
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  • From HermioneGreenleaf on February 10, 2007
    I love this story! Excellent job for your first. I would definitely like to see a sequal.
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  • From DarqueHart on February 10, 2007
    Thank You for a most excellent FIRST! Wow. You've created fantastic new characters and played the regulars in wonderfully wicked ways [Fudge]. But, even though there are a few loose ends, I think you wound up the story so that it should rest on its laurels. The only part that left me wondering about what happens next is obviously, where Sev and Hermione were going and what they do for a living and do they ever come back to Hogwarts. But that part is in most all stories, so is nothing new. New stories with new ideas and approaches are more fun;)
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  • From lilbitbord on February 10, 2007
    Ok I cried at the end. I've been following this story since the beginning, I've been reading it on Ashwinder, but say the new chapter here. Once SH has the new chapter I will review there also, in the mean time I think I will reread the story:) Can't wait for your next story.
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  • From ccrawley on February 10, 2007
    Loved the story. Will wait little while and reread whole story.
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  • From angelnomiko on February 10, 2007
    that was great ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please make the sequel .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Heksy on December 23, 2006
    This is some story.
    As you put it in nice short chapters, it is easy to read and follow.
    It took me only a few hours to read al the chapters.
    Nice twists, certainly a great many surprises, some very interesting characters and oh bullocks...it is just the greatest story ever! So there!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 22, 2006
    whew, this was long. took me 3 days to make it through what you have written, naturally during time when i should have been doing other stuff. oh well, twas worth it and i look forward to reading more soon. hermione's powers are amazing, if i do say so myself. alright, you better update quickly!(lets not make the new reader unhappy =P )
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  • From ANON - vanessa on December 20, 2006
    that was so good, please hurry up and finish the story!!!
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  • From ANON - angel on December 20, 2006
    wow that was great .. im glad he get her to let go .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Morticia Heartless on December 03, 2006
    I found a flaw in your story. Avery is a Deatheater, but his first name is never mentioned in the Lexicon. Robastan La Strange is the husband of Bellatrix Black La Strange. This can be confusing I know but even in an AU you have to keep the canon characters strait.

    Good story by-the-by. If you would clean up the minor errors it could be great.
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