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Reviews for Voldermort must die

By : aphroditiewicca
  • From ANON - Aragon on September 13, 2005
    It is too much if I expect you to know the NAMES of the characters you write about? It's Voldemort. Not VoldeRmort - and since you misspelled several times (beginnning with your title!) I don't think it was a typo....
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  • From ANON - Sirius_harley on September 12, 2005
    I like the premise of the story and am interested on where you're taking the readers. The writing is a bit disjointed and spelling/grammer should be checked more carefully. Plus, 6 chapters in and no sex? It better come soon and in a manner of writing that's better than what has been shown so far to keep my interest.
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  • From selenepotter on September 11, 2005
    I like it so far. I want to see more.
    Less unresolved sexual tension and more sex please.

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  • From ANON - Sea on September 01, 2005
    Good start - looking forward to finding out more. You might want to have your story beta'ed to catch some simple spelling errors, etc. Keep up the good work.
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