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Reviews for Secret Encounter

By : MoChroi
  • From ANON - Anon on January 31, 2006
    ^-^ Good one...yummie...
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on September 15, 2005
    i love it ive read the first and secand one and i think you are a great writer and hope to find more of your work ok
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  • From ANON - momoko on September 04, 2005
    good story
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  • From ANON - antipyro on September 03, 2005
    Wow, Wow! Double WOW!

    Umm....were they doing it in the hallway? or did I miss something.

    Anyways, really great fic, loved the interplay with both of them. Now the second one makes soooo much more sense.


    Very erotic fic, please continue to write more, much more.
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  • From ANON - darkmoore on August 27, 2005
    The idea is nice. There are just a few things I thought I'd mention. First of all I have to agree that it does indeed feel a bit rushed. Second is, get yourself a beta reader. I think you used the word "lover" in almost every sentence when it came to sex - you might want to change that. I don't mean to be rude, this is just a advice from someone who has two really great betas and values their opinion. You have talent and I am sure with the help of a skilled beta you will even get better. =) Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Acid Quill on August 25, 2005
    I agree, it felt rushed, and a beta is needed. So, a series of one shots? Seems to be the thing lately, especially with Severus/Harry and the D/s (not unlike the Shiver Series). Not a bad offering, though.
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  • From ANON - Hambares on August 24, 2005
    Mmmm,......will there be more. I'd like to read about tomorrow night!
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  • From ANON - myniephoenix on August 24, 2005
    it felt a little rushed at times.. but good nonetheless... :)
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  • From ANON - spoon_stalker101 on August 24, 2005
    Please, Please, Please do a series of one shots!!! I REALLY LOVE YOU WRITING STYLE!! I also like the whole safe word thing, very cute. So please write more. ^____^ PLEASE!!!!
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