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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Embrace of the Darkness

By : DarkEmbrace
  • From ANON - Mishra on August 26, 2005
    Nice job Dark,
    I'm really interested now, but please add a few more paragraphs to your story, it's hard to read. If you need a betareader just send me the stuff via E-Mail.
    And hurry up with the next chapter :)


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  • From ANON - Padfoot on August 26, 2005
    Fanfic looks great, I especially like how Snape is written *evil grin* I truly hate Harry, most of the time, however at the moment I did want to give him a hug... if he wasn't starting to smell a little as you say. *holds nose and gives him a one armed hug* Over all, wonderful! *eats fanfic*
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  • From BullKitty on August 26, 2005
    Good. I like the ideas and the flow of the story. Well... for the most part. It does need one thing; a beta. There are a lot of simple spelling mistakes like "trunk" and "truck" or "crack" and "creak" that spellcheck won't pick up.
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