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Reviews for Unwanted Repercussions - formerly consequences

By : Blipo
  • From ANON - Atsukurushii on September 02, 2005
    I love your story! I hope Hermione and Draco are able to have the twins safely.

    PLEASE KEEP WRITING! You are a great author.

    sincerely

    Atsukurushii
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  • From ANON - ju on September 02, 2005
    a six weeks pregnancy dosent notice jejej
    the tale is good anyway
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  • From ANON - Sommer on September 02, 2005
    Oh Draco....he should just let his feelings come out.
    Great Part
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 02, 2005
    I get the feeling a certain Potions Master is playing cupid? Thanks for updating.
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  • From ANON - angel on September 02, 2005
    man that was great i hope draco lose the hole showing her happness is a a weeknese bs and i wound what els or who els is going to help them along ... well in till next time keep up the great work and later

    angel

    ps sorry i have really bad spelling
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  • From ANON - Michelle on September 02, 2005
    I forgot one thing to say. *grins* I loved draco's expresson. *goofy grin* I wonder what hermione infants would look like, and i can't wait to see draco's face. I like this Snape better,than a cold hearted bastard well he is, but, not that much.
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  • From ANON - michelle on September 02, 2005
    good chapter.Why is draco still like that, when is he going to be nice to hermione for once, is she going to be with draco when she has her babies. can't wait for another chapter to be out.
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 02, 2005
    Great chapter - a little short but still brilliant! Please update asap! And also - more goofy Draco!!!
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  • From ANON - Michelle on September 02, 2005
    Silver_eyes, when are your going to updated *pouts* you been updating really good chappies, then suddenly, nothing. I hope to hear from you soon. WE, can't wait for another delicious chapter to be updated. So, I'm not going to say anything because your probably working or busy, or maybe going to school. I just hope you haven't forgotten about us, your devoted reviewers. *grins* bye.
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  • From ANON - lemonade on August 31, 2005
    lol!! Benedict is a good name for Draco's kid. Besides meaning blessing, it reminds me of Benedict Arnold-- which, since Daddy's last name means "Bad Faith" is quite apropo. ;D

    I like the interaction between Hermione and Snape. I am surprised it took him that long to figure it out. Go Hermione!!!
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  • From ANON - Silver_Eyes on August 31, 2005
    Harry and Ron don't know.

    And no they most definately would not let it slide.
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  • From ANON - Kelly Lynn on August 31, 2005
    Interesting story. I can see where you're going with it. Love Snape! Just one question though. If rape is a serious crime in the Harry Potter-verse then when will charges be brought? There's no way that Harry and Ron will just let this slide.
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  • From ANON - heather on August 31, 2005
    i was reading the little rant you left and i do agree that it is wrong to blame or resent a child from a rape. But i dont belive that someone that had been rape would want to even know what the sex of the child was.giveing some time they might be more open to the fact that they are going to have a child from a rape. But not right after they remeber they were raped.
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  • From ANON - jessica on August 30, 2005
    this rocks plz update soon
    ja ne
    ttfn
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on August 30, 2005
    Ok first, it isn't too late to get a Beta, but, they will want to look at the chapters already written and this can take a while as they also have their normal lives and other authors to Beta for. This has led to some authors choosing to update with unbeta-ed versions and then editing them later on, this way it keeps impatient readers at bay, whilst still ending up with near perfect chapters (Yes even the best of Beta's still makes a mistake) Really it is up to personal taste. I think your chapters are fine, but if it is really taking you longer to proof read then write a chapter maybe you should get one - although have you tried writing a paragraph or two, beta-ing, then writing then next paragraph and so on - I normally do this before sending my chapter to my Beta, as it is quicker and does mean my Beta has less work to do, and sends me my chapters back quickly.

    You do also need to keep in mind, that a Beta could hold your story for over a week before being able to proof read it and send it back, which is why it took me a while and several stories before getting one. I only decided to get one, because it helped encourage me to proof read my own, and develop my own skills - for which I use to Beta for other people. (As well as the fact I am doing a Creative Writing Degree)

    Secondly - your review, I thought this was a well written chapter that made me chuckle a bit with Draco's behaviour... hehehe... I like the twins names too... perfect!

    I look forward to your next chapter, whether you decide to get them Beta-ed or not!
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