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Reviews for Awaken Before the Emerald Dawn

By : moonfinder
  • From ANON - jenna on January 15, 2006
    gggrrrrrrrrrr! you just had to leave the chapter off like that didn't you! well please hurry with the update i'm really surprised with how much i like this story, i don't usually read the time travel ones, but it would be oh so torturous to make us wait forever(and not in the fun way) so please hurry** gives bug puppy dog eyes and pouty lip**
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  • From ANON - momoko on January 14, 2006
    good chapter, bye
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  • From ANON - Isadax on January 10, 2006
    What happened ? You know, that's very mean to let us poor readers like that.
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  • From ANON - Aracale on December 16, 2005
    I would like to state first and foremost I like the story, the plot has merit, and I like where you're taking it. Lucius is slightly OOC and is actually five years Sev's senior but it's fiction and a simple AU warning at the beginning ususally suffices for the die hard canon fans.

    I do have a question though, have you sent this off for a beta? I noticed just a few things really throughout that trips up the reader and having them fixed would make this an even better story. Sometimes it's just a simple mistake, confine in chapter one... I think you meant confide. phantom in the same chapter did you mean fathom? You also tend to switch tenses, which is a grammatical no no, it really makes the reader falter. A beta would fix all these problems, trust me I've learned the value of a beta ^_^, they're great help, especially since they can also help to keep your story on track.

    As I said before I *DO* like this story and I want it to continue, but I'd also like to see it beta'd should you decide to take my advice I'll be more than happy to read it again and review with less criticism and more gush ^_^;.

    If you want to contact me, I left my email. Cheers and Happy Hols

    Aracale.
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  • From ANON - jess on December 15, 2005
    stupid lucious
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 15, 2005
    i hope you update more regulary, likes becuase its a great story,
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  • From ANON - eternity_101 on September 05, 2005
    please update, I hope you won't be one of the people who leave their fics to rot.
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  • From ANON - eternity_101 on September 02, 2005
    That was sooooo sweet but, come on let thing get a bit more alive, anyway looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Mel on September 01, 2005
    I love what has happened so far. cant wait to find out what happens next. its good that there are similarities between Harry and Severus (self-harming). Keep up the hard work
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 30, 2005
    ^_^ It's so cute! I really do love it. Though I'm pretty sure that Lucius was about 5 or 6 years ahead of the Marauders, but C'est la vie! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Ru-Shin (Is too lazy to sign in) on August 28, 2005
    I stumbled up on this fic, AND I'M SO GLAD I DID!! ^_^ It's great, I hope you continue to update regularly!

    Ahhhah! *points an accusing finger* You're an anime/manga fan!!! XD I can tell 'cause you say shounen-ai and yaoi, instead of slash. ^-^
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  • From ANON - Katharos on August 27, 2005
    I love this story! It's sweet, not mushy, but I can't help but wonder what will happen when Harry goes back to the future.
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