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Reviews for No More Hiding

By : berkobtch
  • From SchroedingersKat on February 23, 2011
    Great fic! I love the idea of Harry not being what everyone thinks he is. Please update soon!!
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  • From erospandora on August 21, 2009
    i liked this story, i realize that its far in the back of everything but i do hope you did something with it even if it wasn't on here...


    ~eros
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  • From ANON - HUNTRESSS on January 20, 2006
    chapter was great.... story is really coming together so when is the next update????


    UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From ANON - Autumn on January 01, 2006
    Hey this has the makings of a fantablous story but damn man its been FOREVER since youve updated!! PLEASE update soon, I don't wanna drop this story it's awesome.
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  • From ANON - Sunshine on November 05, 2005
    hehe... Please continue this little story, I really liked it, and can
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  • From ANON - Aurora Lopez on October 26, 2005
    I like how you put in the story that Harry ask Snape to help him with closing his mind for a while and to speak with him and can you send me chapters 7-20 of No More Hiding,please bye. write me back!
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  • From ANON - Annie on September 15, 2005
    Hey! My internet has been down for days! That really sucks. Anyways I liked this chapter a lot actually. Just because something doesn't have a lot of info or action in it doesn't mean its not important. Half the scenes in any book won't have action or info in it because then you overload your readers and they have no idea what your writing about, which really sucks. I liked the necklace and the book. I love harry-getting-contacts. Why he doesn't get them in the Books I'll never know. I also liked the fact that Ginny sees that Rons being an ass and has no problem being friends with Harry anyways.

    I think you really need to work on your details. Get us more into the story, tell us what time it is or what the weather outside is like. Not six pages on the blue sky and the green leaves on the trees (because really who wants to read that?) but you really do need more details.

    Happy Writings
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  • From ANON - Christina on September 15, 2005
    Yay! I love this story!!!! Please update soon! You rock! I can wait for the "confrontation" you speak of... and hopefully it has LOTS AND LOTS of snogging...... hehe...
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  • From ANON - momoko on September 14, 2005
    good chapter, bye
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  • From ANON - Raveb on September 13, 2005
    thats what i did when i 'came out' dont ask, dont tell, ask me to my face and ill tell. only problem was the rumors and people constantly asking me about it. the good thing was alot of people came to me for advice and how i knew. it was nice that i helped some people. your description of ron is really quit acurite. love the story so far, im a big fan of dialog
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  • From on September 12, 2005
    Awww, this story is great. I love the new improved Harry, and i can't wait to hopefully hear about some of the sketches he's drawn...
    Can't wait for the next chapter... chow for now!
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  • From ANON - Hazel on September 12, 2005
    I usually try to wait and review at the end of a story, but just to let you know really quick- you have Snape saying 'expelliarmus' instead of 'legilimens' in this chapter (number 6). Just something you might want to consider fixing, I had to read the sentence a couple more times before I realized what was going on. ^_^ I'm absolutely adoring the story so far, and I'm preparing to go down on one knee to ask for Harry to be the sure-thing top in the HD relationship, but I'll write more after I read the next chapter. Love it!



    ~Hazel
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  • From Tatemshope on September 12, 2005
    The chapter was great! I LOVE Luna and how you made her so observant. That's always how I've pictured her! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - elecktra on September 12, 2005
    That was great! I loved it! I can't for the next chapter! So please update soon!
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  • From ANON - anon on September 12, 2005
    great story, add more!
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