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By : berkobtch
  • From ANON - Sheree on September 12, 2005
    Your storyline is good but it's really slow moving. Is this supposed to become Harry/Draco? It doesn't really seem like it since this is chapter 7 and no sign of Draco at all. Maybe it's not realistic to have them fall in love with each other 5 minutes after deciding not to be rivals any more but waiting countless chapters before they even see each other and start talking can make a story kind of tedious. (sorry I'm one of those with a short attention span and prefer that they at least start talking and becoming friends in the first few paragraphs) Please don't get upset or angry. I don't mean to be insulting because this has the makings of a really good story.
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  • From ANON - WynterRose on September 12, 2005
    Oh this was great. Harry got to have a good time with some friends. That was awesome. They are starting to form his core group now, hmmm?
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  • From ANON - PJ on September 12, 2005
    Cool story!!! keep writing I am glad Harry is going to stop living up to (or not) to everyones expectations. They are holding him back. Liked the birthday presents I think the book Neville gave him will be the most useful once he knows more about the wizarding world he will be better off and not "blindsided" so often. The other gifts were great too those were more "fun gifts" which are just as important and "valuable" coming from friends. Update again soon
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  • From ANON - KittyWolf on September 11, 2005
    This is so cool! *puts it under her favorite stories and hopes you update again soon*
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on September 11, 2005
    Instead of contacts why not get them fixed? Oh I can't wait for chapter 8! More please!
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  • From ANON - roxierose13 on September 11, 2005
    That was so cute! I love Luna, she's so awesome! At least Harry has some real friends who care about him...*takes out shotgun and shoots Ron in the leg and scampers away, giggling madly* PLease update soon!
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  • From ANON - justa_me on September 08, 2005
    I like how your story is going....keep it up!!!
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  • From Tatemshope on September 07, 2005
    More! More! LOL... I really like this story, I hope you update soon! Harry's listmaking is a really cool idea.
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  • From ANON - WynterRose on September 07, 2005
    another great chapter. I love how Harry turned the tables on Snape, without Snape realizing it. Totally awesome.
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  • From ANON - moidy on September 06, 2005
    great story. im realyy enjoying it. please update soon ^___^
    moidy
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  • From ANON - Annie on September 06, 2005
    Hmmm is Severus going to be with anyone? And are all the Malfoy's going to join the light? Or just Draco? Can't say I like Narcissa very much but that probably because I like Harry/Lucius and Severus/Lucius stories. I'm a...what was it? Oh yeah 'slash whore' I believe my friend called me.

    Anyways I did like this chapter, even it it seemed a bit rushed. I know how you feel, about the chapters popping out out-of-order. I usually write my own out of order and put them in order after the whole things finished.

    Happy Writings
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  • From ANON - momoko on September 06, 2005
    good chapter
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on September 05, 2005
    Harry dismissed Severus? Holy moly! He is serious! Oh I can't wait for chapter 7!
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  • From ANON - momoko on September 04, 2005
    good story, I like it very much, bye
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  • From ANON - scully on September 03, 2005
    Great updated chapters! Ah, a nice sexy scene--good job on that. Harry did quite a nice solo job on himself. :) really, for your first non het couple sex scene, that was quite hot! cant wait to see harry get trained up and what other secrets he might spill to remus. then of course--on to draco! ;) i would be honoured to beta for you by the way--i will email you.
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