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Reviews for No More Hiding

By : berkobtch
  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on August 31, 2005
    TVs are my big inanimate conversation partner. Hehehehe. Poor Harry! I hope he blows everyone away! Will he be up there with Draco and Hermione in grades? What happens in Diagon Alley? Can't wait for chapter 5!
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  • From ANON - Kit on August 31, 2005
    ohh I like this so far, nice groundwork. Can't wait to see where you go with this.

    as for your question - I think Hermione should realise what Ron's up to once they're all back at Hogwarts...but then I like a lil bit of angst!


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  • From ANON - Nova on August 31, 2005
    Oh, I always love a good "coming out from the closed" story:) I can't wait for more! And ofcourse, coming slash is a plus too:)
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  • From ANON - scully on August 31, 2005
    great story! i like it a lot. i like how harry is trying to "find" himself and that you included remus as his mentor for the process. ron is a git! hermoine should snap out of it soon after they get to hogwarts (or whenever the first time she and ron see harry). i think when harry stands up for himself and she sees the NEW harry that she can realize that she and ron have been prats and then she can start to be friends with harry again. just my suggestion to your question! but, mmm, yeah, i'd like some slashy goodness soon. maybe a dream for harry--a vivid, DETAILED dream--that way you dont have to rush your plot and have draco and harry jump into bed 5 minutes after seeding each other. again--just an idea!
    please post more chapters soon!
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  • From ANON - lilywood on August 31, 2005
    Great story! Keep writing! I'm not a fan of Ron and Hermione, so do what you like with them! I do like it when Ron gets his.
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  • From ANON - WynterRose on August 30, 2005
    omg...this is fantastic. I love how you are writing it. I am ready for the next chapter already. I really want to see a huge blow-up between Ron and Harry, I don't know why I love that with Hermione caught in the middle...wavering on which side to choose.

    I love the groundwork that you are doing. I have the same problem when I write. my current fic has a bit too much het for my taste in it, but it was all needed to get up to the slash, not that there will be tons of it just yet either...so I totally understand. This is fantastic though. I will have to keep my eyes out for it!
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  • From ANON - Jenn on August 30, 2005
    Hermione needs to snap out of it. I love it when Ron is a jerk but hermione still sticks by harry. great story
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  • From ANON - kindal on August 30, 2005
    hey kindal here agian, absolutly lovin it. as for the questions she should soo totally snap out of it during the summer but like at the end. oh also question bout the fick this isn't one of those where like every fucking person at hogwarts suddenly turns gay because thats just unbelievable, and it kinda pisses me off! ;p
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  • From ANON - Annie on August 30, 2005
    I completely agree with you on the Harry/Draco issue. They
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  • From ANON - becca on August 30, 2005
    i think hermoine should snap out of it at school when harry is getting into hi own thing when she sees harry and draco together or something like that.
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  • From ANON - roxierose13 on August 30, 2005
    Hermione should definitely snap out of!, and not abandon Harry when she finds out what we already know, and Harry doesn't... ^_~ I happen to lie storied where Harry is powerful and not a weakling. I also happen to like stories where voldemort is dead, hence all of my fics... but anyway, enough about me, love the story, keep going! and don't let Ron be too much of an ass for too long!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on August 30, 2005
    Oh I can't wait for chapter 4! I agree to some extent on Harry being all powerful. He has to be to some extent. After all he is the one marked to be Voldemort's equal but that doesn't mean he has to have every single special power out there. I so agree about Harry and Draco falling in love minutes after making a truce. Now I can understand if that was the motivation behind it but coming together immediately... no way! You might feel that way but there is that thing called trust. They've hurt and angered each other for years. You can't get over that immediately! *hops off soap box* My apologies. Anyway! Remus saw the scars and the sliced word. He's beginning to learn things and understand. I know it's not probable if you want to stay true to the story but as the reader I'm shouting at my moniter, "How can you miss that? You see he's underweight. You see the scars. Can you not smell the blood? Hello you're a werewolf." But I do that to movies and tv shows as well. *smile* Love the story! I think this is the longest review I've ever written!
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  • From ANON - ladynight on August 30, 2005
    Great story! I think hermione should snap out of it but not until their in school, because unless harry will be going to the burrow during the summer she will be around ron the most. and it is easy to get rapped up in a new relationship, but having her see the new harry will most likely be like a slap upside the head making her rememeber there is a world outside of the relationship.
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  • From ANON - Annie on August 30, 2005
    You're making it so Remus doesn't know about the abuse? That's cool. Let's see....Ron and Hermione have decided they hate Harry? You're making him punkish? or not? LoL. I'm liking where this is going with the Remus-stepping-in-and-making-sure-Harry-is-taken-care-of-thingy. He's had a rought time of it and needs someone to take care of him. Mmmm Harry in leather, low riding leather. Drool worthy. I hope you don't plan to make Harry all powerful or anything. Those stories are boring and completely pointless (expect for the few {very, very, very, few} times I've seen them done well. I really like where this is going. Are you planning on updating every day or was this just a special type thingy?

    Happy Writings
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  • From ANON - Amessis on August 30, 2005
    Great start to this! But what a spot to stop! More please.
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