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Reviews for #1 ~ What Was I Thinking? ~ Part 1

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Anon on September 03, 2005
    Squeeze the lemons !!!!!!!Squeeze them!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Yabo on September 03, 2005
    Dear lord! I think I need to start smoking if I want to finish the rest of this. Great job, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - lindsey on September 03, 2005
    one of the best stories i've read so far...ur a really great writer and i like ur style of writing! i can't wait for the next update for this story!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 02, 2005
    So good! You have to update soon. Just.. wow. I never thought of their relationship that way. Update woman!
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on September 02, 2005
    Wow!!!! This is fantastic so far. (I'm getting mighty thirsty for handsqueezed lemonade!!)
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  • From ANON - Serentipity01 on September 02, 2005
    Hi!

    I just read your story through to chapter five and I am absolutely hooked. Can't wait for the lemons you promised ;)

    The 'private' dialogue was easy to follow, no worries there :)

    I love your style of writing, especially the fact that you tell the story alternating between Herminoe's and Severus' point of view - makes for highy entertaining reading *sigh*

    I'm curious, will you enter an emotional level to the pending relationship between them? I'll confess, I'm a sucker for emotional entanglements on top of physical action ;)

    Guess I'll have to wait and see like everybody else, then ...

    Two thumbs up for your work and virtual moral support for the continuation.

    Serendipity01

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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 02, 2005
    Aha, I see no sweet Snape in the future. Dark Snape to come. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - tonkatrish on September 02, 2005
    Reading these SS/HG fanfics, this by far is the one that leaves me hanging on the edge....not unlike Hermione. The "good girl" dying to slake her thirst with the "bad boy"---- priceless. And he has her without even trying...great job. I'm hooked and awaiting the update
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  • From ANON - nothingness on September 02, 2005
    really great chapter. i cant wait until u update!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 02, 2005
    This story rocks! It's a testament to how good I find this story that you have reduced me to writing such things. By the way, bite as hard as you want. It's sort of a kink of mine ;)>
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  • From ANON - Moi on September 02, 2005
    I thank you from the bottom of my heart for not labeling the dialog. That would have been extremely juvenile.
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 02, 2005
    I thought it was very easy to understand - I mean Severus was calling all the shots, so he was the one with the longer and stronger dialogue, with Hermione answering.... have H: and S: would have broken the flow of it!!!

    This chapter was amazing, and I hope to god you update soon....this chapter had me going crazy!
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  • From ANON - Medea on September 02, 2005
    *takes a deep breath and begins to type. stops. realises she cant say anything much. frowns at herself and tries again* wow... you have the most beautiful lyrical style, your imagery is *flaps again as she cant get the right word* wow. Fantastic. Wonderful. Sensuous. Alluring. Inveigling. And Bewitching.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 02, 2005
    Oh damn, how can you just leave it like that? I'm glad she tore Ron a new one. Men need that sometimes. I guess since you left a cliffy my only consolation can be that you have been updating frequently. I can't wait for that "interception."
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  • From ANON - shiv5468 on September 02, 2005
    Good for Hermione - well said!

    You're building up the tension nicely, and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.

    Just one tiny thing though - it's Hermione not Hermoine. An easy mistake to make.
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