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Reviews for #1 ~ What Was I Thinking? ~ Part 1

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Bree on September 02, 2005
    AHHH!! This is such a wonderful story!!! Not only is it really well written - the dream was just insane - but it's a great plot and the characters and the whole story... Wow. I'm really stoked to continue with this story. I hope you plan on continuing with it soon! THANKS so much :)
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on September 01, 2005
    I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - jenniferr68 on September 01, 2005
    So far its fantastic I cant wait till you write more.
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  • From ANON - Zoltaire the Inscrutable on September 01, 2005
    First Lemony scene, you say? Dang. Yeah, that was good, that was very good. I especially liked that whole 'where the real snake of Slytherin is hidden' part (I know it's not a direct quote, but I can't be fussed to hit the back button, copy it, move back to reviews page and retype the little that I had typed before that part. Sorry.) Seriously, great job. I'll have you know, I actually have passed over this story a few times, before deciding to take a chance with it. Now I'm hooked.

    Eagerly awaiting your next Update.
    Zoltaire the Inscrutable
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  • From ANON - bunny_wigglesworth on September 01, 2005
    *fans self* Oh my... that was something to behold. I must say you have a stunning way with words. I like Snape's fuck-it-all attitude as he decides that he will have the delectable Miss Granger. As one reviewer once told me... 'I do so love a shameless Snape'. As for you first lemon... let me just say... it was just the right amount of 'tart'. Poweful imagery as well, it's interesting to see what is basically a PWP with such imginative, descriptive, language. Keep it up... I can hardly wait to see what the climax of your little tale will bring.
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  • From ANON - Hope on September 01, 2005
    Wonderful absolutely wonderful please get them together soon. It will definitly be worth the wait, hopefully not too long of a wait.
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 01, 2005
    For your first lemony scene - I have to say I am quite amazed. --- In a good way that is --- I thought it was excellant, and just perfect =p

    I can't wait for your next chapter... sigh...
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 01, 2005
    For a first smut scene, you did a wonderful job. I was thinking as I read it that you even came up with some new and eventive descriptions for body parts and secretions. Also, I really liked your dream sequence of the Lioness and The Serpent. Keep doing what you're doing, and you'll have a very well written, and certainly sexy story.
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on September 01, 2005
    Well, That was hot! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on September 01, 2005
    "ready, oh so ready to offer her intimate knowledge of that sweet fruit of good and evil that hung low and pungent between his thighs." What a great line!! Just evokes all sorts of images that are none to pure!

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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 01, 2005
    Wow... interesting, I just hope you aren't going to make Severus too Dark as a character!
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  • From ANON - Kira on September 01, 2005
    This story is fantastic. I really hope you continue with it.
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  • From ANON - firewall on August 31, 2005
    Severus, you sneaky snake you! hahahaha Interesting chapter....that was a dream and a half.
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on August 31, 2005
    Wow!! What a GREAT start! The writing is nothing short of captivating.......... I can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - firewall on August 31, 2005
    This story has possibilities...was it a one shot or are you continuing? I enjoyed Snapes mental responses. LOL I'll be interested to see where you go from here.
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