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Reviews for #1 ~ What Was I Thinking? ~ Part 1

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - aemilia on December 29, 2005
    ok,i'm just being a pain in the ass about this, but the phrase ostendo versti translated comes out to be show true.which i mean, it does work. i'm in latin class and i was reading it and i was all like, 'SWEET!LATIN!' so yea, just little random thing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 22, 2005
    that was so much fun!!!
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  • From SataiDelenn on November 29, 2005
    Review Chapter 5.....

    Good story so far, but you constantly misspell HogwartS..... It is not spelled HogwartZ.....
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  • From on November 26, 2005
    Wow! I have to admit that I finally got enough of courage to review your amazingly fantastic story, I have read this thorough so many times that its now my duty to review this. Hmmm, what I could say? This isn't just a mindless PWP story only with randy shagging scenes but so much more with extra ordinary plot, I liked to see what they're thinking and you carried the plot amazingly good forward. And by the way, Severus is really so fucking good sex-god!!! ;)
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  • From Madettica on November 17, 2005
    *le sigh* Shame there's not really a yummy potions Master to teach...yah well yum is all I can really say at the moment
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  • From ANON - sbrande on October 29, 2005
    Loved every minute of reading this great fic... Sometimes you have to get away from the mundane fics and have a good laugh...
    Cheers and thanks for writing this... Off to read Part 2!!! Sonia
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  • From ANON - Linda on October 12, 2005
    Ms. Figg....great writing. You build your characters with such reality, they are well fleshed out. The sexual tension is extraordinary and your descriptions are awesome.
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  • From ANON - dicey on October 03, 2005
    atta girl, Hermione! I'd like to transfigure that Weasel into a tapeworm for picking on her so much *sniggers*
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  • From ANON - dicey on October 03, 2005
    lady, you sure do have a way with words!! Sev="orgasmic express" ALL ABOARD!!!! (I wanna ticket!!!) *whew* Your Sev is soooo ferally, virile and intensely SEXY *pants* *cartoon tongue hanging down LOW & eyeballs bugged out, etc.*
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  • From ANON - kat1441 on September 23, 2005
    I decided to come back and relive the good old days instead. It occured to me that I had never reviewed before I reviewed that "other" episode of the series. I picked this chapter because it is the sexiest blowjob scene I've ever seen written. Particulary, I think, because he'd never experienced it either. I don't know. Whatever it was, I wish I could write like that!
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  • From ANON - sorynliv on September 19, 2005
    While I'm not very good with a review in true form, I can honestly say that this was a fantastic PWP. The story was well written and, well, 'Holy Smut Batman'. Very hot and lemony fresh. Off to read pt.2. Thanks for the entertainment!
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  • From Ms_Figg on September 19, 2005
    Anna: I appreciate your review. I would like to state however that this story is PORN, and there's a lot of humping and pumping in Porn. That's its reason for being. Sorry if you didn't like the sex scenes. But.....

    Prerequiste for Porn: Men with huge penises and lots of stamina.

    Although I appreciate you expressing interest in reading more of my work, I wouldn't suggest reading What Was I Thinking ~ Part 2. Even though it has somewhat more of a plot, it is still smut, and there are graphic sex scenes there along the very lines you dislike, that would probably offend you very, very, very much. I would rather you not read my work, than read it and feel let down in any way. There are other, much better writers than me out here that are probably more suited to your tastes. Thank you for reviewing.
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  • From ANON - Anna on September 18, 2005
    Pumping back and forth for ages doesn't suggest a sexgod to me. Being a sexy, good lover is about a lot more than having a big penis and stamina. This sex was just bad and boring. The beginning of this fic was really excellent which is why I felt so let down by the fulfilment of all Severus' teasing. You are a great writer and I might certainly look for more of your fics in the future but for now I feel a bit put off by our different views on sexyness or whatever I should call it. Please don't feel discouraged but this is just my honest opinion.

    Love, Anna
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  • From ANON - CynthiaAnastasia on September 17, 2005
    Loved it. Very passionate, and not just a randy piece of smut. I enjoyed how you kept the characters true to the traits they held, even if it meant no sappy happy ending. Well done.
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  • From ANON - amsev on September 16, 2005
    Oh me oh my, but that was so HOT! I look forward to reading part 2, but now I've got to take a breather (fans face with hand)
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