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Reviews for #1 ~ What Was I Thinking? ~ Part 1

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Zoltaire the Inscrutable on September 06, 2005
    Belly dancing, eh? I think I saw a video on that in wally-world the other day. something like Fina and Nina Teach the Art or some such. Who would have thought it could be used in that fashion?!

    Bravo, Ms_Figg, Bravo. Encore! Many, many, many more encores, if you please.

    One thing. I believe you spelled McGonagall's name wrong. (Please don't ask me how that managed to jump out at me in the middle of all that lemony goodness. Heaven's honest truth, I don't know)

    As always, 'twas wonderful. Taa.

    Zoltaire the Inscrutable
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  • From ANON - Serentipity01 on September 06, 2005
    Oh. My. God. You've reduced me to a quivering mass incapable of anything but rereading and obsessing about your story. Congratulation! I seriously envy you your imagination and will therefor be eternally grateful that you had the good sense to share some of it with those less gifted ;)
    Although you DID ruin a lot of other stories for me - I keep finding fault with anything else now ... well, can't have everything, can you ;)
    Please continue writing and posting here!

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  • From ANON - Thea on September 06, 2005
    This is not only a very good lemon-story but also a story in which both - Snape and Hermione - are so in character - very, very good. It
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on September 06, 2005
    WOW That is about all my lust-addled mind can come up with right now! WOW!!!
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  • From ANON - Shmlss on September 06, 2005
    you're a sick woman for leaving this at only ten chapters and an epilogue. sick. what will you do with yourself? knowing that there are much more sexperiences to be had, here.

    wow. kay. wow. thanks (undying and undivided gratitude) for the lemonade. delicious.
    (PINK lemonade! and that's not to imply that your story is fluffy as pink might entail, but more a reference... hehehehahahaha!)
    i left a dollar in the cup. keep the change; i'll be back, expecting more from you, good lady! :)
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  • From ANON - luvssnape on September 06, 2005
    Once again awesome chapter (9). I was excited to see that you updated so soon. I wish that I had your talent. Of course if I could think this stuff up then I would just sit in a daze and never respond to reality so I guess it is wise that I am an avid reader and not an avid writer although I wish I was. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Zoltaire the Inscrutable on September 05, 2005
    Ms_Figg, Sugar. the tobacco companies of this great nation shall shortly be sending you many, many thank-you letters. After reading chapters 8 and 9, wiping the drool from my face and shifting uncomfortably in my chair more times than I care to relate, I feel the need for some sort of post-coital vice. Alas, smoking seems to not be my particular cup of tea, I wonder if they still make those candy cigarettes (we used to use them in elementary school. thought they made us look cool. I was such a dork!)

    More seriously now, that was awesome. that was incredibly great. that was sooooo worth the wait, (even though you are such a treasure and didn't make us wait. thank you! thank you! thank you!) Honestly, that was brilliant. I loved Hermione's brains are sexy comment. such a Hermione thing to do. Also, thank you for not making dear Severus a complete fluff-ball. He's a snarky so-and-so and we love him that way, dang it! Have I mentioned that this was stunning yet?

    Now, you just take your time writing another chapter. Absolutely no pressure from my quarter. You've left plenty of reading material. I can read over and over and over and over. and over and over and over. and then maybe one more time for good measure. or two.

    Can't wait to see what other stories you wish to put to the masses! Taa!

    Zoltaire the Inscrutable
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 05, 2005
    Great chaper... and damn it, if only spells like that existed.... sigh

    Update soon, even if that does mean the end is nearer... i just need the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - deathraven on September 05, 2005
    yaaay! i can't wait for the next chapter!!! update update!!!
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  • From EriWren on September 05, 2005
    I love this. It's my very favorite. I literally sat and read it from chapter one all the way through. You are good.
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  • From ANON - deathraven on September 05, 2005
    omg i love your story so far can't wait for the next update!!
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  • From ANON - DeathCab on September 05, 2005
    Omg.... need moreeee *dies*
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  • From ANON - nothingness on September 05, 2005
    omg!! that is sooo hot. you've got to update soon or i might just explode!!
    ~hugs, nothingness~
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  • From ANON - luvssnape on September 05, 2005
    Wow!!! That was an awesome chapter. I can't wait for more!! I love the dialogue that you give Severus it is different, more real, than many other stories that I have read.
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on September 05, 2005
    Well, that was HOT! I can't wait to see what Hermione does to Severus in the next chapter. Will he really be able to leave her after their night together?
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