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Reviews for #1 ~ What Was I Thinking? ~ Part 1

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Cindy on September 05, 2005
    This is so good! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - katie on September 05, 2005
    oooo i hope you do bring the enxt chapter soon its a very good story ive been watching for it every day
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  • From ANON - Zoltaire the Inscrutable on September 05, 2005
    TONIGHT! TONIGHT! TONIGHT! Do not make us wait! We've waited long enough! (sorry, but that letter of dear, DEAR Severus' gave me chills.) You don't know how upset I was getting reading this chapter. All sexual frustration and tension and what-not, building up to the big climax (pun TOTALLY intended) and then we slow down quite a bit to examine Hermione's intentions and thought process. NOOOOOO! Now, gentle author, write this day down. This is the first, last and only time I will ever say this. For the love of all that is holy and quite a few things that are not: SKIP THE PLOT AND BRING ME SMUT! Seriously, I usually by-pass PWP, but the tension is too much for even me to take any longer! I'm going cross-eyed from trying to imagine what your creative little mind will be gifting us with. Wouldn't that be a treat for my optometrist! 'I don't need glasses, doctor, I just need Ms_Figg to write the smut already!'

    Okay now, I hope this review can be the one to sway you to release chapter 8 early, and to release we {cough me}, the desperate reader[s] of our need for smut. Pretty please?

    Zoltaire the Inscrutable
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  • From ANON - MyEmeraldEyes on September 04, 2005
    Your not stopping there are you? I am simply going to say: I like it, no actually I love it! Hehe Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on September 04, 2005
    Smashing story, dearie!!! I just love it! You must realize that you have been way too much of a tease thus far! Naughty git! Now you shall be punished- enter Snape with a whip and various other punishments. Seriously though this is some very great writing! You have a really good way of teasing us along and we still come back for more! And I, too, like my Snape just the way you write him. You have done a wonderful job of staying true to the character and adding your own unique flavor to him. Bravo, sweetie!!! I am anxiously awaiting the "deflowering" and I hope that much shagging will ensue(is that spelled right? Oh well, much too lazy to get up and check)! Much happy writing, mi chicquita! Tengo que irme! Salud!
    Hugs and kisses!
    Killer K (Lovin' my Snape!!!)
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  • From ANON - TheAngelOfSilence on September 04, 2005
    Wahey!!!!Come on , my dear, harvest those lemons from the tree! I for one cannot wait!
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  • From ANON - BeautifullyMalicious on September 04, 2005
    This is one of the best HG/SS's that I've come across in a while. The UST is simply divine. Keep writing, I'm DYING to read the smut!
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 04, 2005
    Yes, the game is afoot and by the glittering of Snape's eyes, he's enjoying every second of the foreplay. LOL I am glad to hear that Hermione still has some gumption, I'd hate for her to be a doormat and a snarky Snape needs someone who will stand up to him. Here's hoping for another chapter tonight. *fingers crossed*
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  • From ANON - cboyer21 on September 04, 2005
    Okay, blackmail worked to get me to review, something I rarely do. I can't wait to see what you have planned next
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 04, 2005
    This story is definitely developing into a really interesting and well-developed story. Thanks for sharing it with us. Gotta love an egocentric selfish Snape. BUT I could give Hermione a good swift boot in the butt...I hope she develops a bit of backbone.
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  • From ANON - Medea on September 04, 2005
    A writer after my own heart then ,) I hate Fluffy Severus.. its just not canon and its just not Severus. He's a bastard, thats why we love him because woman love bastards. Lets face it, we wouldnt be the shippers we are if we didnt want deep down what this story is portraying ,)
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 04, 2005
    Oh mn you have to update again soon - you are not jus torturing Hermione, but me and the rest of the readers too!!!!

    I hope you feel better, cause real life sucks, so get well soon - but don't push yourself to write the next chapter if you feel too bad.
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  • From ANON - DawnEB on September 04, 2005
    You know, citrus is very good for colds. Why don't you just immerse yourself in lemon, then share with the rest of us? ;) I like your nasty snarky Severus, with just the slightest inkling of a conscience ruthlessly subdued.
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  • From ANON - luvssnape on September 04, 2005
    I LOVE this story. I love the way you portray snape. I love my Snape dark and cruel and sarcastic. I can't wait to see what happens next. I am happy that you update so frequently. Looking forward to more!!!
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  • From ANON - Lord Voldemort on September 03, 2005
    I would just like to say that I rather object to the fact that I am hardly in this story at all. Severus Snape is nothing but a snivelling piece of traitorous filth.You must stop writing about him "getting laid" as you Muggles put it, and let MOI deflower the delectable Miss Granger instead.I am the Dark Lord.Everyone knows that means I will be a much better shag and far more evil to boot. I order you to write sexy lemons about Lord Voldemort and beeeeyoutiful LAYDEEZ this instant.
    Love from
    The Dark Lord xx
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