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Reviews for When Snow Melts

By : TriSanctum
  • From ANON - The doctors In on September 02, 2005
    Very slow moving and hard to understand. Think I will hit the back button and find something else my head might be able to figure out.
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  • From ANON - leviathan06 on September 02, 2005
    This sentence 'When snow melts, what does it become?' reminds me a lot of fruits basket. Its when Hatori asks that to Tohru. If you have seen the anime or read the manga then you know what I'm talking about if not...oh well

    Anywho like the story so far. I just love Harry/Draco stories can't get enough of 'em. Hope you do continue with this story.



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  • From ANON - Melissa on September 02, 2005
    I enjoyed this chapter, I like the way you're going with this. So did Harry really hear that question? I now that Hermione wanted Ron to tell Harry that they are dating. Now what was Ron going to say about draco? He was staying stuff alost sticking up for him. I wish Harry wouldn't have such a temper, it doesn't become him. So far I haven't seen any spelling mistakes or grammar, so if you ever need someone to edit your work before putting it on here, I'd be honoured. This is an amazing story, superb chapter. Now what do you get when ice melts? Well water, if this is associated with Draco that would mean the ice around his heart has melted? Or the mask he has been portraying has melted? Please continue and Email me on the next update. So update as soon as possibal. Have you ever thought of putting this on fanfiction?

    Peace out,
    Founderschild
    xxx
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  • From ANON - Amessis on September 02, 2005
    Nice job on this-mysteies are allaround it seems.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on September 02, 2005
    Why is the question in the potions book? Why did Draco ask it? Why does it seem familiar to Harry? Need chapter 3 please!
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  • From ANON - Kendra on September 01, 2005
    Your writing was magnificent! I am being completely honest, so please write more^_^
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  • From ANON - Melissa on September 01, 2005
    This was very interesting, I enjoyed it very much, Please do continue and update. Can you emasil me when you update. I want to see how this turns out, good luck to you
    peace out
    founderschild
    xxx
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  • From ANON - Amessis on September 01, 2005
    Interesting start to this = I'm looking forward to where you're taking this. Especially since you have my 2 fav boys in it together. =)
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on September 01, 2005
    What did Ron see? What did Draco do? Why did Severus shiver at the thought of Lily's eyes. Vengeful eyes he called them. Oh I can't wait for chapter 2!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 01, 2005
    intersting start. what does snow melting have to do with anything i wonder? keep it going!
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