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Reviews for Cool

By : Tashasaphi
  • From ANON - Lauryn on November 08, 2005
    Hey
    that was awesome!
    It seemed so realistic, and I love Gwen. What you did with that song was mighty interesting.
    A really powerful story.
    I really enjoyed it, it was like I was right there in the cafe watching it.
    Thanks!

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  • From ANON - scully on November 08, 2005
    ack! great but i HATE sad endings! go back and make it better! ditch the ginny an take the draco!
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  • From ANON - Aurora on November 08, 2005
    Please update soon. Your story is great so far and i can't waite to read more.
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  • From ANON - Amessis on November 08, 2005
    Uh oh! Harry's going to get it! Nice job.
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  • From ANON - BurningSilence on November 08, 2005
    AH! I need to know what happens! I absolutely cannot WAIT until chapter three!!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on November 08, 2005
    Livid? Why? Can't wait for chapter 3!!!
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  • From ANON - The Author on October 23, 2005
    Here's me reviewing myself since no one else does (thanks to the 6 of you who did!!!)

    Waaaah wahhhhh!

    Sad sad sad.

    But guess what- THERE'S A SEQUEL!

    It's on it's way!

    Tsx
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  • From on October 18, 2005
    omg... no happy ending?
    I loved it, its was beautifully written...
    Chow for now!
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  • From ANON - Lily on October 03, 2005
    subject: WHERE IN THE NAME OF ALL THAT IS HOLY IS MY MOCHA MUG?
    i need to get out more.
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  • From ANON - Jinx on September 08, 2005
    Well that was a brilliant little story. Sad as hell but brilliant. Don't suppose you'd consider dumping Ginny off a bridge or anything. Chapter Two, "Just Kidding! Harry Comes to His Senses and runs after Draco!" Oh good, now I feel much better.
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  • From DemonBlaze on September 08, 2005
    That was a wonderful peice. Harry and Draco's characterization was done wonderfully. You stated things without overstating them, and that made the piece even better. It had a bittersweet ending though that left me feeling sad and a bit cold on the inside, but not in a bad way! Just...I like happy endings more times than not and this made me feel horrible that there wasnt one. I hope you find the song for a sequel that will hopefully have a happy ending. Harry loves Ginny, but even he, himself stated (in his thoughts) that Ginny and Cho were tom-boyish and that added to they're appeal for him. He loves her, he's just not in love with her I think. Once again hope you find a song for the sequel.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on September 08, 2005
    No!!! You've got to continue! Does he go through with the wedding? What happens next? Oh I've gotta know! He may love her but he's not in love with her.
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  • From ANON - Chiaki Dark on September 08, 2005
    OH GOD!

    *covers face with hands*

    What a lovely, heartwrenching, angsty piece! Jesus! I can't breathe!! And what a song to choose for it!! *remembers music video*

    You didn't overdo the imagery OR overdo the vocabulary. (Some authors litter their pieces with that stuff and it's almost as bad as the "bad stuff.") Also, I felt that the characterization was done so well for this story. I enjoyed Draco very much, and Harry as well. Especially after the last two lines-EVEN THOUGH IT BROKE MY GODDAMN HEART!! *sniffs* Again, this was a perfect REAL love story. Sometimes, no matter how much it hurst me to admit cause I'm a hopeless romantic here-*inhales deeply*.... there is no happy ending.....

    Thank you for sharing this amazing read. I hope to read more from you, and maybe one day something WITH a happy ending? ;]

    PS: Even though, like I said- ME = hopeless romantic. I think this fic would be such an impact even on its own. Soo... I guess it's up to you if you want to write a sequel..... and if you DO decide *smiles brightly* I'll help search for that perfect song!! (I'm not biased, really! *g*) *goes off to search for sequel song* :] x 10
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