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Reviews for #2 ~ What Was I Thinking ~ Part 2 (Small Edit)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Koda on September 16, 2005

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  • From ANON - applebee on September 16, 2005
    To quote Paris Hilton 'That's Hot'. Update soon:)
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  • From ANON - JW on September 16, 2005
    Ch 22 - so cute! Hmm, they should keep a gallon of purple stuff by the nightstand, along with that salve. Yes, Salazar would be very proud!!
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  • From ANON - mary on September 16, 2005
    This is really good! Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Remetan on September 16, 2005
    Oh, goodness gracious! The glory of slythering indeed! I am fanning myself here. HOT!!!

    I thank you for the lemonade!
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  • From ANON - Stormi on September 16, 2005
    Chapter 20 & 21

    Wow! Need the next chapter now please!


    Stormi


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  • From ANON - JW on September 16, 2005
    Ch 21 - hot! Warped person that I am, I really liked the "like a carriage return" line. What stamina that Severus has! Good thing there are lots of lemons in the orchard..... Thanks for posting!
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  • From ANON - Larissa on September 16, 2005
    whoa*fans herself frantically*just...whoa
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  • From ANON - Sedina on September 16, 2005
    "Yes, lord... yes!"
    I hope you give Hermione and Severus their "years and years from now". The psychological aspect of this fic seems secondary, but it is so very well written that I think it really isn't. Extremely well done, I hope you update soon!

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  • From ANON - redwiccan on September 16, 2005
    To your last comment...isn't that the god awful truth!!..his voice alone could do wonderful things... Thankyou for keeping Snape in cannon. Your story is one of the best I've read and I have read a whole lot of these..too nice severus is just not a good thing..Bless you..you are doing a great job of keeping him the way I picture him in my mind..please keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Bobbie on September 16, 2005
    sweet crist oh mighty, i guess this is where we can say," DAMN GOD IS GOOD." ok, heart rate slowing down again. I guess we can say every womans fantisy, mind is blown, cant spell..damn your good.want more soon...........S O O N...............
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 16, 2005
    WOW! Take me, Severus, *pout* damn it! Hermione gets all the fun!
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  • From ANON - Catpower on September 16, 2005
    Aww! All that tough talk and what Sevvie really wants is to be kissed all over - to be shown gentleness, love and affection! Well, he's certainly lickable enough for it to be a pleasure to oblige - and he thought that would be the biggest deal! He even thought that a week of being shagged by him at Snape Manor was a THREAT! LMAO! I'm sure H is up for it.

    I really loved the line, "Completely naked, and pacing through his rooms like a big cat". What a great way to start a paragraph - or even a novel, in fact.

    Also liked Hermione shaking her wand when her lumos spell was failing - like shaking up the battery in a torch. LOL.

    All that scary stuff in the dark was exciting and I've never read a sex scene like that before. This story is so great. Keep writing and thanks for your efforts so far.
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  • From ANON - andrea on September 16, 2005
    it's cold to leave us hanging like THAT! You have some of the best sex scenes I've ever read. You don't rush it and it makes it so hot. Great job.
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  • From ANON - Serentipity01 on September 16, 2005
    I completely agree with you! 'Oh yes lord, do as you please! Do all you please!'
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