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Reviews for #2 ~ What Was I Thinking ~ Part 2 (Small Edit)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Thea on September 15, 2005
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  • From ANON - Catpower on September 15, 2005
    Wonderful. Your writing just seems to get better and better. Not to mention more prolific - don't you ever sleep? No - you are probably kept awake by Severus, hahaha.

    Loved the line, "even someone as dark and unseemly as Severus deserves a chance at happiness".
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  • From ANON - Remetan on September 15, 2005
    Oy, on chapter 17. She did that...thing...and wow. Gotta love that. Sometimes I wish I had that power. I think my life would be a lot more fun if I did. He always accuses me of...oh...rambling...tmi...Anyhow. I am definitely primed and ready to go for the lemonade. Please, please...
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 15, 2005
    Wow... hehehe! Fair play, I say.

    Great chapter and those before it too! Can't wait till the next few are up!!!

    Well done!!
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  • From ANON - TAELFO on September 15, 2005
    DAMN.......MORE,MORE,MORE..........
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  • From ANON - JW on September 15, 2005
    Ch 17 - "update this with this last lemon" - that doesn't mean this is the last of the lemons, does it? I hope not! You said something about "lemon orchards," didn't you? Thanks for explaining about the apparition within Hogwarts; seems like forever since I read "Part 1" and even then, my head was more into "other things" than apparition. Dunno why.... I loved the part here about "That
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  • From ANON - Serentipity01 on September 15, 2005
    Oh, the joy of getting up in the morning and finding THREE new chapters! You are too good to be true, really ;) So, now bring the lemons on, please?*persuasiveplea* I loved Hermione getting to him on such a personal level - and figuring out how to use the connection (such a slytherin thingto do really) ;) Gotta love a Severus in emotional turmoil *hehe*
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  • From ANON - Sorceress Black on September 15, 2005
    OK I just came back and found that there are some new chappies to read but I just had to stop and review first. I am just terrible for not reviewing this fabulous story, I am usually really good about it but well shit I dunno I messed up ok lol. I started reading this before you finished part 1 and it was just brilliant I mean the way you kept Severus in character was superb, seriously some of the best Sev writing I have seen. Anyhow I continued reading as soon as you started part 2, and it has only gotten better, honestly I dont know if I have worthy compliments, so I will just say that it is utterly fantastic writing, you are extemely talented and your stories have been a joy to read. Your Severus is just damn delicious lol. OK well I established that I have been a naughty reader with no previous reviews and that I love your fic, so with that I shall run like the wind to read the latest chapters. Keep up the wonderful work, you are truly gifted. :) and on a side note: when did the bloody font get changed around here? lol Sleep is a wonderful thing and I shall consider it but not before I go and read. well I'm off :)
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on September 14, 2005
    JW, in part one, (with a little creative license) it is explained that Severus can apparate from or to his rooms or office to answer or return from the summons of the Dark Lord. He usually cannot function after a summons because of the application of the Cruciatus Curse, and would probably die outside the gates of Hogwarts otherwise. I neglected to rehash that in this story. Sorry bout that.
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  • From ANON - Luvssnape on September 14, 2005
    Oh my goodness what a cliffy!!!! Need More!!!!AAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!
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  • From ANON - JW on September 14, 2005
    Ch 16 - hey, he's not supposed to be able to disapparate within Hogwarts? I hope she has a tracking spell on him - this time, she might need to tie him down! Don't let him get away, Hermione! (BTW, that was a very lovely monologue you wrote for Hermione.)
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  • From ANON - Zoltaire the Inscrutable on September 14, 2005
    Aaaarrrgggghhh! I so seriously feel for Hermione. He wouldn't listen to emotions. He wouldn't listen to verbal explanation of physical need. Time for the secret weapon. Dominatrix Hermione! Woo-hoo! Bring out the handcuffs and whips! We'll make him give us what we want! Yeah! You heard right! We'll make him give it to us! If Hermione isn't getting to have smut, I'm not getting to read smut. If I'm not getting to read smut, I'm not happy, and neither is anyone around me! So please, please please, make Severus give Hermione smut! It's for the good of the country!

    Once again, great chapter. am looking forward to next installment. Taa.

    Zoltaire the Inscrutable
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  • From ANON - Remetan on September 14, 2005
    What the hell did just happen? Not fair, lady, not fair at all. I am all tense, just waiting for our damned bullheaded potions master to come around. I can't imagine how poor Hermione must feel, after that passionate speech!

    Can't wait, just can't wait!
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 14, 2005
    Chapter 15 You tease!!!!!! hahaha Naughty girl. Just get that pen on that paper and don't even think of using lemon juice for invisible ink!!!! Please, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - beeky63 on September 14, 2005
    Great story and the plot thickens. Will Voldemort die? Will Severus finally be free to love Hermione openly? Don't keep us waiting. Update soon PPPPlllllleeeeaaaasssseeee.
    Toodles.
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