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Reviews for #2 ~ What Was I Thinking ~ Part 2 (Small Edit)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - anonymouse on September 13, 2005
    Evil teasing author. I must have more! Please
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  • From Remetan on September 13, 2005
    Goodness I like this story. I keep waiting and get all excited when I see it pop up again all updated. Thank you very much for sharing it. Please keep it up!
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  • From ANON - JW on September 13, 2005
    Ch 12 - THANK YOU for letting him live!! So glad she tested things on those poor rats. I'm also glad she's realizing that he can't say "I love you" like regular (non- Death Eater spy) people, and she doesn't even know much about his family background. Dare I say there's light at the end of this tunnel? I like the way you continue to deepen the Severus and Hermione characterizations. I hate fics where Hermione is shallow, and she's certainly not shallow here.
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on September 13, 2005
    Hmm. Getting a bit too kittenish in the latest installment!! Please reassure your dutiful, slavish readers that Hermione's cursory perusal of Snape's psych book is merely the foreshadowing of more luscious lemons in the future!!
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 13, 2005
    Well I really lucked tonight, 3 incredible chapters to read. I was a little concerned there. I thought Voldemort had lost control and killed him. Superbe writing. Thank you
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  • From ANON - carrie on September 13, 2005
    ???????? interesting
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  • From ANON - Lord Voldemort on September 13, 2005
    I see that you have chosen to disobey Lord Voldemort's orders, despite my gracious review of your previous instalment.
    How dare you continue to write licentious and lusty scenes featuring Severus Snape? I command you to destroy this vile abomination, this travesty, at once. Then you may begin work on MY story.
    It must contain lemons such as this world had never seen.
    Huge and juicy and all featuring ME, Lord Voldemort, and attractive young blondes, preferably with large breasts.
    But what do I see here? Even Wormtail is getting in on the act!
    Do not disobey Lord Voldemort's orders, Muggle.............I command more tangy citrine action than a greengrocer on Pancake day!
    If you fail, I shall E mail the killing curse to your inbox at sunset!MWAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - TMC on September 13, 2005
    Hi, I have to tell you, I have enjoyed reading this piece very much. However, in reference to the last chapter, what were you thinking? I used to make my living writing and you are very talented. Yet, I am one of those hopeless romantics who would like to see Severus have a shot at happiness. Again, you are very talented, seem to have original ideas and present them very well. As for the sex scenes, while I am not offended by them, I don't think they are really the vocal point of this piece. The mental and emotional push and shove between the two of them is much more interesting. Have some heart; give the wizard a chance.
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  • From ANON - macropis on September 13, 2005
    Great story! I do hope you don't opt for character death, or an angst-y ending. No need for kittens and flowers. Think about it. Your Hermione is ruined for other men. And Snape (yours and JKR's) has had a really crappy life. He deserves a bit of happiness. Give it too him. I *highly* doubt JKR will, in her final revealment.
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 13, 2005
    I apologise for the lack of reviewing, but I spent the last couple of days at a friends house, and didn't have access to a computer!

    But kinda cool to come back and have sooo many to read!!!!

    Speaking of reading... this story is progressing and I am becoming incredibly engrossed in this story! So please, please don't let Severus be dead!
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  • From ANON - Catpower on September 13, 2005
    Nicely phrased short chappie. Wasn't sure if Hermione encountered him after Sev apparated back to Hogwarts or if Hermione came to rescue him - in front of Voldie though..
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  • From ANON - JW on September 13, 2005
    Ch 11 - okay, he's still alive, right? right? Sigh.... thank you for the chapter. Please update again soon! (happy ending.... happy ending....)
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  • From ANON - Stormi on September 13, 2005

    Chapter 12


    It may have been short but it was really, really powerful!


    Keep up the great work.


    Stormi


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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 13, 2005
    Oh now that was cruel! To leave us with that! More damn you wench more! Please?
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  • From ANON - Zoltaire the Inscrutable on September 13, 2005
    Noooo! My poor Sevvie-poo! (yes, yes, I know he'd avada me in a heart-beat for saying that, if he weren't a fictional character) Great job with the torture scene. It was very sterile. Sterile/clinical is, surprisingly enough, usually best at conveying the sense of horror needed in a torture scene. Think about every horror movie you've ever seen. The ones that scare the spit out of me are the ones where there's no musical build-up, where there's no 'let's get into the character's head and make the audience FEEL how scared they are.' It's almost always the detached, clinical telling that scares people the most. It kind of lends an aura of hoplessness and inevitability to the whole situation that just magnifies the terror. I DO hope you won't kill of Severus. But if you do, you could look into the world of ghost/mortal relations. think of all the possibilites there! Cause we all know, Severus would have PLENTY of unfinished business to attend to.

    Great chapter, as always. Taa.

    Zoltaire the Inscrutable
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